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Uncle of the Bride

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by Anonymous

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by Mistress_Canada07/15/10

Great story

Funny, and with a real sense of the characters, despite being so short. Good job, great writing.

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by Anonymous07/16/10

Perfect recipe

I hadn't realised just how sexy the ingredients wicked, touching, and clever can be when mixed up and stirred together in just the right way.

Bellisimo

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by TheRavensRegent07/16/10

Clever and Hot

At first, I thought the banter was a little trite, but as you went along, it picked up and made it that much more enjoyable.

I really liked the story, I must say. Flows neatly, with equal parts of the hot sex that I've come to know and love from Literotoica, with an actual readability.

Very nice. Bravo, good sir, bravo.

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