All Comments on 'Penny For Your Thoughts'

Good story line, but it really screams for a little editing polish

wonderful

Liked it. Great writing, I'm a terrible critic of word use. You did VERY good.

Thanks

The phrase, early on in the story, 'squares of delisiousness on the counter', turned me green with envy. It has been my theory for some time that the best writing comes from the older writers-you have helped nail it down. Thank you sir.

Another fun story...Keep em coming

This story is very touching. They loved each other for years, and it took an accident for them to finally admit it.

Truly a great story.

You wrote again a tear-stained story.

Thank you

Juergen

One of the best romance stories I've read recently. Keep up the good work.

These stories you are writing are written very well and and have a ton of emotion that they extract from the reader, me not being any exception.

Your writing is meticulous in the fact that it does exactly what you intended it to do. Thanks for this! It is a pleasure to read them!

It has left a great feeling reading your stories today!

In the last two days I've read everyone of your stories and everyone has been fantastic. Keep up the good work!

Wonderful story! Keep up the great writing!

I am reading all your stories and love them. Great human emotion to touch one's soul. Keep up the good work!

An excellent story!

Fantastic! You sir are gifted!

All the elements are here and well written. The only thing is that it would be better yet with more dialogue IMHO.

Very beautiful. All of your romance is passionate and heartwarming. Excellent author.

Plausible - romantic - happy (in the end) - presents life as it reasonably could be -

Fun to read too - thank you for sharing your work -

Your stories are very enjoyable.

reading from a master taler

Great story!!!!

A couple of Intresting twists in this romance. Well paced and well written.

You have some real talent. Your words paint pictures in the mind, very well written story, or stories as I have real most of your stories at this point. Great job.

You write very good and entertaining stories. Like another commentator on a different story, I wonder what happened to you? All your stories were posted in a one month period in 2010, and them you vanished.

moogplayer says it better then anyone, "WOW". Question? why did you write for 1 month and then go away?

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

This story is Fantastic! Lucky for me I have never been with anyone who has or had amnesia? It must be hell for them! My heart goes out to them. 10 stars. Love you all! Bye. Greg

A true love should be monogamy.

Thanks for giving me smiles today and making me feel great. You really can write great stories. Thanks for sharing. BK 4716

It's me again. Great job on the story of true love! The only thing I have to know is

How many kids did they have! Also a cat named sox and a dog called buster? Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Great story,from childhood to,well,new childhood.

Well worth the read and,a BIG 5+ rating!

The way and reason why Penny pushed away her best friend and only man she ever loved, except for her own father... man, it was so ridiculous... I know she was also grieving at the time, but why her mom didn't step up, when she saw what her daughter was doing, and told her "Girl, you're losing it! Why are you ripping out your heart to try to feel good???"

Anyway... This is pretty much my sole complaint with this tale - author should have come up with a better way to force those two kids apart. Except for that, once again, very well written and quite uplifting.

All and all, mostly sunshine here.

Why would she dump her best friend??? He having a dad and she not DID NOT make for a good story line author. She didn't just dump him she trashed him. I would have a very hard time forgiving her for that. She is a stupid selfish person. Is that what you meant to portray author? She is all that as you described in the story. Rewrite the story author and get it right next time...a better idea would help...

I loved it! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

I really enjoyed reading your story, I thought it was really good but I do wish that you had but more details in it, for example when she started remember again I wish it hadn't been 'gone to sleep, BOOM, remembers everything', let it take more slow. Other than that I loved it! I think you're a great writer!

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks go to the author for sharing.

this happens more than we think and it slips into memories, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very nice story, thank you very much.

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Great ending. These stories make me feel great. Thank you so much

nice feel good story

Little bit fast. But love that story ❤

I have to agree with Mightyhornys comments But still, I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This story made a lot of cents...

Hmmm... previously irrational hate towards former best friend + additional brain damage causing amnesia = let's hope that girl isn't going to murder-suicide her whole family in the near future...

In for a penny…nice feel good story. Good characterization. As a reader your descriptions and dialogue enabled me to really bond and as I became more involved the feel good part made this reader feel very good! Good job!

It looks like you did a story dump 12 years ago and nothing since. If you are still writing, please accept this one criticism: Nouns, when used as names, are capitalized.

This is my mom. Not a name.

I love you Mom. Is a name.

Let’s go get my dad. Not a name.

Let’s go get Dad. Is a name.

He’s a real asshole. Not a name.

Hey Asshole, give me my money back. Is a name.

Rick was a little woman crazy stupid potter!!

Where is the boyfriend during the accident!!

Ricky is a cuck in training

AGAIN, SHOULD NOT BE A ROMANCE STORY!! JUST A SLUT PENNY AND A HEARTSICK WIMP

Penny became an angry frustrated SLUT after her father died.....nothing romantic about her character

Yeah sorry nothing about Penny seems remotely noble or admirable. She's in an accident so cuckboy nurses her back to health and of course just as he's about to leave I Remember You😳

Bitchy, Selfish Sluts just don't do it for me and cucky simp betas like this pathetic excuse for a man even less so

Wow some really rough comments before. Yeah Penny was a bitch to the MC in their senior year of high school, but she had just seen her father die. Besides she was in love with the MC but they never got together and she thought he felt she was like a sister. Her grief pushed him away. Get over it. She was like 17. And she was in thr car with a girlfriend. So what if she dated some jock in high school. When the MC says the last time he spoke to her was at the bus stop. That was like 18 months before her accident. Personally as a friend, when been treated like dirt as she dumped on me, I would have had it out with her and eventually told her how I felt. Would have at least tried to comfort her after probably venting an argument. She had anger and grief and envy and unrequited love trapped deep inside her. She took it out on the MC. Shit happens. People are complex. She got her memories back and realized what a witch she had been. He still loved her. People are emotional and sometimes irrational. Love is one of the most irrational emotions.

Sounds like Penny has some developmental issues. Was she waiting for the short bus when she got mad at the mc because his dad was alive? To the comment below, yeah love can make you irrational. But not soo f'n dumb that you get that mad at someone because their parents are alive, not at 17 or 18. That's just absurd. Hopefully his grandparents are already dead or she might really lose it huh?

Penny is a selfish slut and cucky boy MC got the leftovers

well written

Another great tear jerker! So well written and loving! Thank you. Could use chaoter update?

Reading it again... so loving. Needs chapter 2.

The author wrote during the year 2010 and not in t he 13 years since. Instead of commenting to the author, I will comment to future readers. This is a wonderul little Romance and well worth the read!

Overcoming life's unexpected obstacles was the hardest separation. Reconciliation and manifestation of love was all the more sweeter.

Nice story. Characters full of warts but real. Enjoyed following the developments as they matured and found their true identities. John

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Que Romqantique!

11/10!!!!!