by lmnop321
why the change of characters as interest was building?
well written, one of the best tease stories around, not too long as well, great!!
I loved, loved, loved this story. Incredibly hot and exciting. If this is a true story, you've lived out every man's fantasy! WOW!
Hot! Hot! Hot! Great buildup to bombastic payoff ! A 5+!
Several mistakes, but not bad.