All Comments on 'Ignorance is Bliss Ch. 02'

you seem to be taking a long time for the action to start. The story so far is written very well. but i keep thinking "come on do something"

Please note this is only my observation and does not mean to offend.

Bazza

It's not that the story is too long. I like the fact that you're building up to something. The problem is that you're stopping. Forget the short installments. This story is well-written enough that readers can stay interested in these characters until you can get them into bed, so quit with the one page stuff and give us the story.

I like the build-up, keep 'em coming :) (chapters that is. lol). But, having said that, I should add: "the slower the build-up there is, the greater the expectation to 'deliver' it's going to create" Don't disappoint us!