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the best!
Fantastic ending. i am off to read the whole thing again. Great work Molly! Hope to hear from you soon. Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us.
Cloak of Lies
I really did enjoy reading this ... was so surprised to see the last two chapters, but am glad I did. You weave a good story. Very well done! Thanks for sharing.
WOW!!
I can't believe you finally finished it. Talk about leaving a girl on the edge for the last year.! I really hope you keep writing, this was an excellent story, personally speaking it would make a great movie!!
AMAZING!!!
Amazing, amazing, amazing story!!!
It goes far beyond the caliber you usually read of this site- truly, I can imagine this made into a best-selling novel or even a movie!
Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us and I hope you continue to write more amazing stories!
Amazing
Molly... this is my fav story of yours... you know that... it is simply wonderful.. no matter how many times I read it... I love it and it just gets better... Thank you so much for sharing it... you rock ... your kung fu is strong!
I loved it!
Thank you for sharing it!
Gr8 story
I could not stop reading once I started.
Wow
This story was amazing This is the best that I have read on this site. You have a real talent. Give us more. Thank you
Thanx for the Epilogue
It was a GREAT story, and I really appreciated the time you spent wrapping it up instead of just "happily ever after".
Senator ?
Never cleaned up the dirty state senator!
Could make a great movie
It really could
One of the absolute best five stars
I was glad to see our main characters happy and back together and with their baby. Also, Brick and Lorette marrying and contented and with child. The characters were extremely well developed and described with heaps of emotion and drama. I'd love to see this in movie form ...it's much better than anything I've seen coming out of Hollywood in many years. Thank you for a wonderful and enjoyable story.
Brilliant
Loved it.
Sucked me in from the start and kept drawing me in more.
Would be nice to see something about Olan but am glad that Brick and Lorette are happy
Loved it!
Very hot, intriguing, sexy.
Wow!
One of the best I have ever read on here. Only a woman could have done the romance and sex scenes I just read. Combining that with all the action was wonderful. I wish I had found it earlier! Old Marine Vet - Ron R Wood
Wonderful, well written story
Thanks, I really enjoyed this.
The standard of writing was top class and the characters were excellent, particularly Camille. It was a real emotional roller-coaster for her, yet she remained vibrant and loveable throughout.
A nice happy ending too...well done!
Great story series!
A really good read with a lot going on and loved the characters. Good writing!!!!
One of the best stories on here!!
I absolutely loved this story, without a doubt one of the best read on the site. Not only was it well constructed but the characters were extremely well woven into the plot. I would recommend this tale to anyone.
Great Read!
This story would make a great movie.
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