All Comments on 'Closet Quickie'

---like all second person stories. 'You' do all this to 'me', and 'I' do certain things to 'you', and 'we' do things together, and then for some reason that is totally unfathomable, and unrealistic to the point of absurdity, 'you' imagine that 'I' need your account of it, as though 'I' didn't know anything about what has happened between 'us', even though 'I' was there, apparently, the whole time.

Second person stories are seldom even interesting, never mind exciting. I wish people would think of the absurdity of them.

I am hopefull not all readers feel this way. Thankyou for all those who do actually like my piece and for all those who do not I thankyou for considering it and your honest opinion.

I enjoyed this one too!, don't let negative comments deter you, shit! sweetie they can't even put their name to their comments, just ignore them and keep writing.