Watch Me Play

A girl helping out would be sweet.

that's hot

wow...........it says it all..........good job DIR

Wet panties

......you are at your best when your panties are wet!

Taking yourself to one very hard cumming

great first story. love it more to cum i hope. the writing was very hot and exciting. you are good at this kind of writing so lets have many more hot horny stories from you now.

A nice arousing story from the female POV

I very much enjoyed reading this. It's nicely paced and of a good length and description of feelings as well as actions makes it highly erotic.

I will read more by you, well done!

Great story

One of my favorite subjects and you captured it wonderfully!
I felt like I was there, and wish I was!! ;)

Very

Very Very nice
Loved it

Loving your work RED=)

Soft, sweet loving for one

I love the way her fantasy turns real around her, or almost. The sound, scent, and taste turned almost real for me, too.

Watch me play

Hey Delicious, I just read your short story "Watch me play". It was very well done, descriptive adjectives abound, a nice sprinkling of raw eroticism mingled with a touch of class.... Good job, Deliciosa


Garbage Can.......PG

Very Sexy

This drips so much sexiness I gasped when she came....Very nice!

Awesome.

You totally put me there. I wish I was the one watching from the darkness...

Intense!

That is a hot story DIR. I enjoyed it immensely!

Licking my lips

Watching you from the shadows, licking my lips, desiring a taste of your sweet erotic honey

Female Masturbation...always a HOT read

The story in general I liked, but unfortunately it also seemed kind of short. I found myself wishing it went into more detail.