by Athalia
this was one of the best stories i have ever read as far as losing your virginity, and i applaud both older adults for handling it with such finesse. keep up the good work
brilliant story do hope there's more parts to cum.
love the writing awesome. reading this was like watching it on film.
so very erotic and horny. you sure had my attention any way.
great thanks very exciting
You manage to convey that sex is fun while at the same time turning me on. Moreover, your writing is technically superior to 99.9% of the contributions to Literotica. Reading your story was unadulterated pleasure. The only problem is that you may now have set my expectations higher than you can sustain as I go on to read your other submissions.
I don't rate or comment on a lot of stories but I thought that this one deserved both from me, It's an excellent story keep up the good work!
So nice to see an erotic story with a sensible base.
No monster penises, no huge mammary boulders.
Do agree that the lady superior position is the best way to gauge a new loving.
Did enjoy your language, it seemed relative to the characters.
Why couldn't I find such a chance and also such teachers in my day.
You have a great way with words, and a deliciously Dirty and creative mind... Ace
I think it's a great idea to have a two-on-two, first time sex experience described in this story. Way better than a hurried back-seat or behind-the-bleachers first time experience that leaves both parties disappointed.
This of the best first time stories I've ever read. There's something special and tender about it. Thanks for posting.
Well, this is rather different than most stories one sees here. It is so well written and for such a short story the characters are well drawn out. So the story on its own is wonderful and the sex is terrific. I really enjoyed the story and will read more of your work.
Beautiful story. Outstanding mix of character interaction and erotic imagery in a vignette format - great job!
As the editor of this story, allow me to point out that Emily has a series of stories on this site. It's the "Hot Tub" series, in which she shares a house (and beds) with a college professor, his wife, their grown kids, and a close family friend. I do have to point out that when the list of stories is shown, they aren't chronologically sorted, so please read them in the sequence of the date of submission. The first in the series is "Hot Tub Service Girl."
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