It's great when writers dig back for those genuinely erotic events we've all had (haven't we?). Fantasy is fine but it's too easy to get carried away and lose credibility - love the real stuff and looking forward to a messy conclusion!
thought this was great - would love to hear what happens next
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Anonymous12/30/13
4 stars (****)
A very good story, fully believable, truly erotic but not pornographic. This could have happened to the very lucky ones of us who were bold enough to seize the moment.
English
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There better be more than this.
liked it
---more please
Excellent start
That young man needs attention too dont you think?
Loved it
It's great when writers dig back for those genuinely erotic events we've all had (haven't we?). Fantasy is fine but it's too easy to get carried away and lose credibility - love the real stuff and looking forward to a messy conclusion!
More Please
Excellent story. When can we expect more?
great
"I may be a lot of things but I am not a tease."
Is that true for the author as well?
well written
thought this was great - would love to hear what happens next
4 stars (****)
A very good story, fully believable, truly erotic but not pornographic. This could have happened to the very lucky ones of us who were bold enough to seize the moment.
Seizing the moment
"carpe diem " indeed
Sounds like fun!
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