Irish Eyes

Just one problem

Property acquired before marriage ain't community property.

Stunned!

I'm stunned that no-one has commented on this wonderful story yet.

It was well told and highly entertaining. It was a little predictable, but it was such a nice tale that it didn't matter much.

Thank you author for your efforts and I look forward to reading more of your submissions.

Outstanding!

Good Tale! Not all Gloom & Doom.

I wish...

I wish there was was a Caitlan in my life. Well done!

Old West

I can almost imagine being on this ranch and seeing the things you describe in your story this is truly one of my favorites and I will store it and read it again and again keep up the writing you are really talented Larry

Nor is:

Inherited property. The growth since marriage would be communal property but not the pricipal. Great story anyway and thats all that counts. Well done. Mike in Missouri

Lovely

In the short time you have been posting you have become one of my favorite authors.

Keep up the good work.

GREAT STORY....

wow... I am impressed... and I do NOT impress easy at all....

Not a thing wrong with this ... very strong characters...

BULLY!

WOW

Someone finally impressed Harry. I didn't think he liked anything or anybody, but that's okay because he keeps us on our toes and helps us to become better at writing with his critiques.

Good plot, good flow, and good character development. I too appreciate a good honest romance with a happy ending instead of all the doom and gloom.

Thanks for your hard work and excellent story. Keep it up.

You'd Best Be Careful

Spinner - - - This is only the second of your stories that I have read, and it seems to me that if you keep up the quality of what you do, perhaps Jake Rivers, DG Hear, Telephone Man, and the Wandering Denham Forest will be forced to welcome you into that special inner circle here on Literotoca. You'd Best Be Careful or you'll make it for sure!! Nicely done thus far, and you've been added to my Favorites list.

Sincerely, Prof. Ramstein

Damn that was GOOD!

That was a very satisfying read!

I did enjoy it from begining to end. You have obvious talent, and I now look forward to more!

Thanks for comimg here to post on Lit. I am going to read the rest of your posts!

More please!

With the quality of your story-telling and writing, it is scary to imagine how good you would be with a full length novel!

Great

What a wonderful story!

Boyd

So much better than your last posting.....

....and what makes you one of the best here is your mastery of dialogue. So readable and realistic. Harry just saves praise for only the very best.

Sorry, I disagree, you should indiacte locations, weather, etc

Your story starts out as one story and then becomes a second story with his move (Where?). He came from Texas but went where? The ranch is large so from the movies I'd assume that the ranch he worked at was, in fact, also in Texas.

You started with a cheating wife story and that got my attention. I wanted to see how you'd handle it but you did little with this story. Rather, you have him begin a new life somewhere in Texas, New Mexico or Colorado? The second part of his life in which he purchases the Wilson ranch is interesting but not have been better if you had also carried through on the cheating wife story at the same time. We never did get to know Janice's character and to hear her story. Well, all is well and ends well.

Story takes place in Montana

On the first page it is mentioned that Carson is in Montana and twice again on the second page.

Excellent

Apart from some details, this is an excellent story and well worth the reading. Nicely done! I hope to see more soon

Excellent story

This story read like some of my wife's romance novels, and I loved it!
Keep up the good work.

Outstanding

great story, keep up the good work

Thanks,

I tend to read the "loving wives" stories, but they get so depressing after awhile and your story is such a "pick me up". Appreciate the good writing and characterization. Thanks,

I LOVE A HAPPY ENDING!

Shades of 1oodmen, Wander DeForest, JackR, DhearG, HDn, OhO, H2O, PDQ, Rehnfertist, Zeke's 7 thru 103and Blu's#2 thru #99, don't forget JPP, and TMI, and all the other happy ending rich guy writers who spin such wonderfully heart warming family value fairy tales. Creating worlds where most any and all of life's problems can be solved by simply throwing enough money at them (combined of course, with a few well placed shots, kicks, punches, or karate chops). As trite and as formula as it is, it just seems so "American" some how, and I am proud to be an American, and I freely admit; "I love the hell out of this shit!" But, I gotta wonder about somebody who marries "well" as a career goal. I find it hard to believe that the slut wife would give up so easily and just go away for a measly 40K. And that Wilson and his crew would ever see that kind of hard time unless it was their third or fourth offense. One must also assume that Wilson was too cheap (because with a spread like his, he couldn't be broke) to hire a decent lawyer who would have never let the prosecution admit a coerced confession. Shorty could have walked by turning states evidence against the Sheriffs department! State prosecutors love to eat small town Sheriffs who threaten to turn perps over to their victims. Surprisingly they actually consider "the lynch mob mentality" of coerced or extorted confessions by an officer of the law a much worse crime than trespassing, and grand theft cow. Besides Bill probably would have acquired the Wilson ranch during the subsequent civil suit after about three to five years of litigation, then liquidating forty to eighty percent to cover lawyer fees. And "MARRY CAITLIN!?!?" Gimme a break! Even if Caitlin was a hottie, does Carson really wanna marry some local chick who has "dated" dozens of the towns eligible players? Even if she didn't sleep with all of them, there are probably more than a few who have "been there and done that," and would love to swap "I fucked your wife" stories with Carson for many, many years to come. That being said; I very much enjoyed your story! Generally I never read the tags or the comments before making my own comments, but since it was long, and in the romance category, I sneaked a peek to the last page and noticed Harry liked it. Intrigued, I read the whole story (and liked it too) but felt obligated to throw out a few constructive/destructive nit picks since Harry gave you a "slide." Should I ever post a story, AND Harry likes it, I would expect the same consideration from you.

Wonderful

Could be a loving wifes story, but who cares. I enjoyed it.

good story

over-all very good story

A truly pleasant read

This was time well spent :-)

Good Story; Great Ending

Refreshing, credible, and well paced.

Great story.

Refreshing. I enjoyed your story and appreciate your efforts.

Now I would like to address Zed0's thoughtful comments. Which of his "numerous contributions" did all this wisdom come from?

Why can people not just read a story and enjoy it or just dismiss it? Why do you think you have to rewrite the story? If you are a regular reader of Literotia and cannot suspend reality to a certain degree, then I assure you that you are in the wrong place. You should be in the library in the non-fiction section.

Just a thought.

Again thanks for entertaining some of us for a little while.

Another masterpiece

I just have to say marvellous. I am really impressed.

Your German fan

Jürgen

Great story.

Thanks for such a great story.

Another great story from Web_Spinner

I love your stories. Whenever I really like an author's style I look at his previous ones. How do you write so many stories in a short period? Or do you have a stash of them ready to publish? Either way you have a consistent style which I, for one, will look forward to in future. Are we seeing another egmontgrigor in the making, folks?

Excellent story

I really like your stories. The characters and storylines are superb. I can't wait to read your next one!

Another winner

What can I add to the other comments except that this was a great story. Love happy endings.

A very pleasant, gentle story

Whilst I enjoy stories with a bit of angst and tension, after a while they get kinda wearing. It's great to read a story like this. Thank you Web_Spinner for your efforts.

Nice

Well done. Engoyed it.

WELL DONE!

Not rare, or medium rare, but extremely WELL DONE!! Just perfect!

beautiful story

Very well written, the build up was so erotic, please write more!

Great

What can I say about your stories but great. Love the way you let it all come together.

A fine story!

I give this one a five plus, a fine piece of work.

Another GREAT story!

What can I say, Another great story!

Awesome!!!!!

Ive enjoyed all of your Romance stories. I hope You'll be writing more soon.

Golod romance.

I believe it takes time for a true relationship to blossom, and you paced thisone very well. You were correct, Catlin was not Janice.

I really enjoyed the story....

It has a little bit of everything from betrayal of a cheating wife, transition to a new area and life, romance with a hauty redhaired Irish beauty and adventure with rustlers. Great story....

A Wonderful Story

A very well written story with very well defined an developed characters a true pleasure to read thank you

Thank You

Good story. I would have liked to here a little more about how bad the X wife is doing.
The amount of sex in the story was/is just the right mount, not to grafic.
Thank You for sharing your work with us/me!

What a treat!

I was perusing the top list and remembered this story from a previous reading. It was just as enjoyable the second time through. A well-crafted story with characters with heart and soul. And the sex comes as a natural consequence of the story.

Thank you for sharing with us. And I'll always be looking for your stories in the future.

Lovely Read

Enjoyed again for the first time!

Stumbled across this story. Really is a refreshing and wonderful tale!

Author, thank you.

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Fantastic! The best I have read in a long time!5171

loved it........ Fiji as a honeymoon is wonderful.... miss my home in Fiji now :(

but really lovely story... keep it up

Bravo!!!

This is a good one! Thank you.

WHERE ARE YOU WEB SPINNER

YOU STORIES A 5 STARS THIS ONE IS IMPRESSIVE.GREAT.. YOU HAVENT WRITTEN ANYTHING THIS YEAR ?? LOVE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK..