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ANNE240ANNE240over 20 years ago
Like em all!

Just wanted to say again how much I enjoy all of your stories! Definately my other favorite author! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Excellent

Wish it was my sister! I cant stop fantasising about my sister now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
WONDERFUL

I wish I had a sister for that to happen to me!

Guava ManGuava Manalmost 20 years ago
i agree

definately the best author i have come across on literotica... great stuff! i have a suggestion though, maybe you could consolidate a couple of stories into one, like, make a big long story instead of these little ones?

that would be the bomb ;P!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
HOT!

Excellent story, i love this author, KEEP WRITING!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hard Again!

Damn good story. Wish it was my sister. Made me so hard, I think I will have to whack it! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
HOrny ass hell

I am so horny right now please submit more I need to get off

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Nice!

I had to hold back just so I would not cum all over the computer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Amazing

You have a talent for writing a very realistic story, or was it just a story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great

Your story was great. i couldnt help but massage my cock the whole time

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
panties and hairy pussy

Nice story, but you need to go into more detail. Describe her pussy more and her tits. Tell us if she wore full cut nylon panties? What color? What size is your dick? Paint us a nice picture.

THANKS, Frank

__over 19 years agoAuthor
Um, yeah...

Thanks for the constructive criticism, but don't bother suggesting content for my stories. There's no way you've put as much thought into my stories as I have.

gudhnarayangudhnarayanover 19 years ago
I LOVE ASS GRINDING TOO

I LOVE YOUR STORY TOO MUCH.

AS GRINDING IS MY FAVOURATE THING IN SEXUAL ACTS. YOU ARE A GREAT DESCRIBER OF THE FANTACIES. I LIKE YOUR WORK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great

this story was sooo hot i cummed 3 times to it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I RELATE

i had to share a bed with my sister once. nothing happened though. i wish something did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
my orgasm

My orgasm

I had three orgasms while reading this story. My pussy felt so good. Thank you.

__over 19 years agoAuthor
If I had 3 orgasms...

...I would leave more than a 50. I'm just saying. Maybe 3 isn't that much for you.

SimbaBearSimbaBearover 19 years ago
Perfect Love

The story was perfect. When you love someone, even a brother or sister, it is alright to show them that they are loved. A very tender story about a brother/sister. I think in this time of society this happens more than people realize. I just wish I had had the experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great

I loved it. It not only was great sex, but there was a pure love for them. Fantastic job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
really good

Very well written in my opinion. From a literary point of view, I think it is very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
lol

i never thought my cock could be so limp but while reading your story it damn near crawled back inside taking my nuts with it. Terrible story should have included mom and dad as well as the grandparents and maybe even a family pet. Better luck next time.

p.s. having the brother rape the sister and blackmail her could have been a cool plot twist

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Loved it!

Very sensual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
ahh

very sensual, very hot. nice pace and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wish it happened to me!

I liked it! I shared a Bed with my sister once. My cock brushed her cheeks much like your story and felt her arse but that was it. Wish we went as far as your story did!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot pussy

I Loved the story, it is my secret fantasy. my pussy got so hot while reading this, i had to jump on top of my brother, he was reading it too. we love too read ]erotic stories together and then act it out. i cummed 5 times during this session. i am getting hot just thinking about it. i might use my fingers now instead of my brothers cock..........ohhhhhhhhh i cant type anymoreeeeeeee..........fuck im cummminnnggggggg

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great job

I always love reading about bro. and sis love and this was a great story.keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
DUDE ! IT SUCKS .IT SUCKS , IT SUCKS, AND IT SUCKS

EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK THIS STORY SUCKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS .OH MY GOD I ALMOST PUKED ON THE COMPUTER WHEN I RED THIS SHIT.DO NOT EVER WRITE SUCH STUFF DUDE.

Don1028Don1028almost 19 years ago
Who is this jerk

If he didn't like it he could have quit any time..

PS-He should learn spelling and the English language

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
cool

enjoyed your story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
U can count on me

Hey Dude!

Great yar! If it is true its great. If itz ur imagination really hats off :-) Hey I rate this story 2nd on the website.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
awesome

i love mom and son and sis and bro, great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
brother and sis sex

i was so turned on by this story that i came in my pants

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Damn

I loved it, but it wasn't long enuff. It was long enuff to git me off in my pants tho, congrats to the other guy that also acheived this..Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice

awesome story and wat Hot pussy wrote that freaking drove me wild to actually kno that brothers and sisters are gettin it on man o man

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love it totally

I loved it totally! You know, they beginngin I though was too short and not enough detials. But still, keep it up!

smiler03smiler03over 18 years ago
Wonderful

Great story, it sounds so believable that it might even be true...... I wish I could have done that with my sisters, keep writing please!!!

smiler03smiler03over 18 years ago
Wonderful

Great story, it sounds so believable that it might even be true...... I wish I could have done that with my sisters, keep writing please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GR* !!

hello ... i just loved wat u wrote ... it is one of ma fantasis :D ... but i would neva like it for real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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this is one of the stories on the site i come back to. i love the buildup before things turn explicitly consensual...when the brother doesn't know if it's all right but he just can't control himself. also a big fan of dry humping. keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice

i love having a step sis

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sick fuk

this is sick, but so am i for reading it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Fucking awsome

Greatest story that I have read in a long time. props to the writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
nicely done

very nice story. similar in many respects to how i lost my virginity (hooray for step-sisters:"no blood in the water, jump right in"), and for that reminiscense i thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
If...

If one gets sick, whilst fucking, does that make one a "sick fuck"? God, I hope not! I liked this story so much I nearly kicked my computer off the desk, falling over backward after getting my peenie caught in my zip...Oooppps! I didn't mean to say that! Anywho, great story! Two thumbs, way up!

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 18 years ago
Ah, the good old days

Reminds you of your youth, for sure. This is neat story and kinda sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sent me over the edge!

I would have liked more teasing and playing, and more dirty dialogue, but overall this was fantastic :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Beginning

Hot story. Would love to read about their exploration to open sex with each other. Explore and Explore telling each other what feels good and great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
love it...

Thanks... this is a great story. My sister is a year younger than me... and almost the same thing happened... almost...

lornadunnlornadunnalmost 18 years ago
good story

liked the story but i found it difficult to believe that his parents would encourage them to share a bed

I know when we had visitors a makeshift bed was placed on the floor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
OH BROTHER!

I came from a famly of 5 sisters and we were quite crowded too. I was the older brother and never took advantage of the possible sexual smorgasbord I had before me! Nice to read fantasites like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant! I loved the innocence of it all. The best part to all these incest stories is just that point when the guy realises that he likes it, but he shouldn't, can't believe he's actually thinking/doing this disgusting thing but he secretly loves it and wants more, intrigued etc etc. The best part too is when he doesn't know if sis is awake or asleep and if she's awake is she frightened or secretly enjoying it - is she confused about her feelings too - all this intense rollercoaster of feelings at the point of trial/experimentation/when it could go horribly wrong if the other person doesn't consent etc etc. Fantastic! I loved the 6am piece when he's humping her ass. Excellent - wish he shagged her from behind when she got back into bed - just slipped it inbetween her butt cheeks... lovely! Didn't get past the 8am before I had to shoot my load! Will def be back to see the rest of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
fucking great

that was just great, ive got a rock hard cock in my hand now, thanks to that story. fuck it was hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Cuming just about the same time he did.

Great story, got me off, hope you write more. Unlike the person before me that had 5 sisters and never took advantage of it...I had four younger sisters and tried them all out with the help of my next youngest sis who got my virginity. Loved the jump back in time for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sexy

I just love reading incest stories. It's very erotic especially if it's mutual.

I sometimes wonder though, if the comments that other leave are really true, about how they've been incestuous with their own family. Would be very hot if i knew it were true.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
sis

my older sisters husband was away from home and i lived with my sister, one night when we were in bed she called to me from her bedroom said she couldnt sleep, she was worrying about her husband with another woman. i went into her room and sat on her bed stroked her head and told her not to worry, she said to get in bed with her to keep warm!i got in and of course it happened,it was great and thru the years we did it when the opportunity arose

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
nice

nice story something happend almost the same to me

Darkstar321Darkstar321over 17 years ago
The best yet!

Hell, this is the best story I have read among your stories. The reluctance of the sister, the facing away from him and pretending to be asleep all reflect my own experiences well!! If I know you, I would say you have not done it before but as I do not know you, perhaps you have done it before with your sister?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved it`

I loved the idea of something so innocent turning into something so wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mutual Love and Respect

I find this the best of your stories because they were nice to each other. And that's the way life ought to be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot!!!

Reading this gave me a hardon and I couldn't stop till I came all over my self, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Perfect Gradations

I've never commented on a piece before, but your story was so excellent I felt utterly compelled to this time. The build-up was perfectly gradual, and the language used (steering away from a copious use of words like cunt and cock) lent the piece a sense of innocence and quiet discovery. It seemed so perfectly natural, it was almost as if I was there myself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
THIS IS SO HOT!

I still come back to this story when I want to shoot a load of cum QUICKLY!

IT NEVER FAILS TO GET ME OFF!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Me too.....

This sort of thing is so commonplace it's not true...I've been fucking my sister for years,in fact she has been married three times,is aged 60 and we still fuck now and then.She loves her husband and I,my wife but it is just so horny and simple that we love doing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Decisiveness

I give it a 75 not for what the others display. I myself having never been in an incestous relationship, but thats not to say that some thoughts here and there did not occur. I found your short story to be sensual and almost romantic, granted it was a little short but still a nice read. I compliment you for your efforts and your decent grammar.

- Denounced

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
awesome story

all i have to say is fkn awesome story real or not, great detail, totally believable content, and nice lead to the main event.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
The Most Natural Experience

This story was written so well, As though you had this experience yourself. I truley enjoyed it for something like this happened to me when I was younger. I am 53 now and remember it like it was yesterday. You brought it all back to me and how awsome it really was, THANK YOU SO MUCH.

THE JAYSTER

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Thank you

Unlike some other readers . this has never happened to me but I wish it had . I do have a cousin that I loved dearly and would gladly have fucked but my family got between us . Thanks for letting me experience what I might have had . You could do a part 2 even now .

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice read

great story , very warm and hot, keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Erotic

I enjoyed reading this story. The build up to the actual sexual encounter was well written. I have to agree with one of the previous comments that said you didn't use words like cunt or cock and this led to the gradual buildup. It honestly was just like being there. I only wish I had had a sister that I could have enjoyed this type of encounter. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Smooth!

Soft. Slow. Gentle. Real. Smooth.

Very nicely done! I loved the way that the characters needs overwhelmed their resistance, causing them to give in to their urgent sexual needs. The guy's actions were natural and real, (I know from personal experience) he wasn't digesting his decision, just acting, like a young guy would. The girl's inaction was totally characteristic of a female in need of exploring dangerous territory, but letting the guy make the move.

Over all; Realistic. Sensual. Romantic. Sexy As Hell!

10/10

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Incest

100/100.for this stories.It seems like 100%true stories.we expecting these stories many........

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I Wish

I loved this story! I have always had fantasies of incest but don't think anything could ever happen. I have a sister who is 3 years older than me and one that is 5 years younger. All my friends tell me how hot they are and I act like the are crazy but I know they're right. I would love to make passionate love to both of them. I always masturbate while thinking about them. Thank you for the great story. I was picturing me and my younger sister while reading it and I blew a huge load of cum! Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not my thing

Personaly speaking, incest just isnt my thing, I think it is very grose and imoral [so is porn but im hooked].

Just personaly...no offense

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wtf...

if you dont like the subject, then why are you reading a story about it. wtf did u expect it to be about. come on.

guyatrandomguyatrandomabout 15 years ago
Just one Change

The way it was written was QUITE enjoyable. I really enjoyed it. If only it was foster brother and sister. Then it'd be sexy and less taboo

Dmitry1518Dmitry1518about 15 years ago
Tired of stupid people...

Seriously, are you two retarded? Why the hell would you read a story you thought was both immoral and grose. The story was great, I only wish it had been a little longer and they'd gotten to enjoy more of eachother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good but

good but the second night was a little unrealistic if he was a virgin and was afraid she was mad at him then he would have made a bed on the floor and already been in it when she came in to go to bed then she would start the virgin talk also i agree it was way to short you don't say what happens the rest of the week or after the relatives leave you also don't say if the parents find out or if she gets pregnantanother chapter would fill in the blanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Porn <> reality

Imagine! A porn story that's unrealistic! Here's a secret: some of the women in porn movies aren't really in love with or even turned on by their partners. And in some of these stories the authors aren't into incest in their life. I thought the story was good; I didn't worry about it being unrealistic. They were both into it; they didn't get into anal, which I don't like [and they didn't get into oral, which I enjoy], and they didn't go on about their guilt feelings. I'd like to read about the rest of the week, and them almost getting caught, and when the relatives left they kept it up and she brought one of her friends over for a 3-way, or their cute cousin invited them for a visit and they got to break her in [or she found out they were playing around and she taught them sone games. It's a great start, and you could go so many places with it.

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
Nice little tale!

To hell with the idiot naysayers who are turned off by incest stories. Perhaps they should be aware of the category, before they bother reading the story. That said; I thought it was a really fun little story and didn't find it unrealistic at all. Thanks for a nice submission and for sharing your creative talents.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
its only a story

you guys are taking this a bit too seriously, its only a fantasy, the story was really enjoyable but some people are really thinking about doing it and that is just plain wrong. like its only ok to look not touch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent - longer please

Excellent stories. Just need to be longer. Thanks for your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not to bad

That's not to bad, I do think however that you need to make it a little bit longer though, other then that though It's really good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great!

this was one of the best stories ive read on literotica. i was really surprised by how good it was!

literoticafan10172literoticafan10172over 14 years ago
Excellent story

Excellent but you should add more literal detail in what the brother felt as he basically jizzed on his sister. For example: As i squirted and soaked her panties i felt myself throb with ecstacy. The combination of her warmth radiating from her panties now soaked in my semen sent strong surging feelings of satisfying along with soft tingles i have never experienced before.

Basically what im trying to say is the orgasm is the best part to read of any story.

Than you continue with:

When i was finished...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I want a roommate!!

Nice write. Would have preferred her sliding his cock into her ass this time (lubed by his first cum). Hot hot hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
amazing

not too long gr8 story thank u sooo much

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Missed some opportunities

For their first time, there was not much exploration or appreciation of the other's body. They have all week, should've had some foreplay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MAKE IT LONGER

awesome story hehe, i wna know how it continues in the week =( it should have been longer. but i rly think its an awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow

Damn that's hot

yaoi_queenyaoi_queenover 14 years ago
nice!

that was an awesome story!

lenox732lenox732over 14 years ago
wow

So excellent,beautiful....and exciting

KonyhaKonyhaover 14 years ago
Sweet

Sexy and very arousing.

lormahoykyd2007lormahoykyd2007over 14 years ago
U-Haul

Very moving story, Beautiful and the sex to a simmering loving level for such a short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice short

great short story, though not much sex detail, anywway, very arousing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WoWieeee

nice dude...

yo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wowwww

ughhh man that made me sooo horny! im gonna fuck my boyfrend now lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
mm

omg that turned me on so bad

LgeeLgeeabout 14 years ago

damn.. ive read this story more than 5 times and it still makes me hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
great

great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

great one i wanna fuck

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