by niindel
well as this is your first I take it. I think you are going to get better with the more stories you write keep at it I like the story it could have been longer.
why isn't literotica more consistent requiring editors? You need help.
Loved your story about the wonderful way a latin mother-in-law opened up her future daughter to the ways of women. So much hunger in such a short reading but nice.
I squirter at this story. thank you so very much!
What a nice find you made. I hope all went well when she came to Chicago.
Nice little story! Can't wait to read the follow-up! Maybe she ought to marry his Mother, instead of him!
This is really bad. I really don't understand what anyone can like about it. Also, what the fuck is with the milk? THAT DOESN'T HAPPEN LIKE THAT! Just stop writing now.
Good plot with the overall outline. However I think it needed more descriptive information about the people involved and more detail about the sex.
I look forward to seeing you develop the story line. Nice start.
I had a very intimate relationship with my mother in law, too.
Sweet, and romantic with nice touch of sex. It was karma that she wound up with the sweet family member instead of the spoiled lover.
My Mother-In-Law and I have been lovers since my wedding day when she gave me a "welcome to the family" hug and kiss that included the use of her tongue. She came into the room I was using to dress and pack for the honeymoon, and we ended up on the bed in a 69 position licking eachother's pussy...In the 22 years since that day, she and I have become closer than my husband and hers ever were and we still evoke orgasms together whenever we can.
If I found out my wife was having a lesbian affair with my mother I wouldn't mind at all.