Showers do have a tendency to be wet, and quite frankly, this story has made me wet without me even getting into the shower. Nicely done! Since I do need to take a shower this morning before I go to work, I'll have to be in there, imagining that my bf is doing to me, the things your main character did to Katie in the story. That should certainly help wake me up. Thanks for getting me wet. Bravo!
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Anonymous07/22/13
A good piece, for a larger story
Good writing, but more as one of a series of climax to a good story
The brain has many lobes to stimulate, the focus here was on a few of the many
English
Nice
Quick and to the point. ;)
Wet Showers
Showers do have a tendency to be wet, and quite frankly, this story has made me wet without me even getting into the shower. Nicely done! Since I do need to take a shower this morning before I go to work, I'll have to be in there, imagining that my bf is doing to me, the things your main character did to Katie in the story. That should certainly help wake me up. Thanks for getting me wet. Bravo!
A good piece, for a larger story
Good writing, but more as one of a series of climax to a good story
The brain has many lobes to stimulate, the focus here was on a few of the many
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