All Comments on 'Not Just Another Tuesday Night'

Great potential here

Good start looking forward to much more !!!!

Look this is literary erotica, save the suspense for commercial T V

You've set the scene really well for what could be a good story, You've introduced kat and have hinted at other women. You could introduce a different 'go-to girl' in each chapter. I hope you manage to weave an entertaining story for us all to read.

Pete.

keep going!!