All Comments on 'The Time Machine Ch. 2'

by Wyden Long

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Enjoyable Reading

Deserves, and shall receive a '5-Star"! This is really enjoyable reading.

Talk about a story where a time machine (of a sort) actually is used as a tool of seduction.

zena99zena99almost 6 years ago
Great Improvement over the first Chapter

Really enjoying how this is progressing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Ch 1 was interesting but this one was even better. Very clever and I liked the story moving into not just the usual freeze and do what you want then move on. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
One of my favorite fantasies (time-stop)...

...brought to the printed page by a masterfully executed tale, full of magical mysterious, unexplainable occurrancess that would have even Master (Tony Nelson] on "I Dream of Jeannie" struggling to explain.

YOMEYO

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