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Great Story, but
For it to be top level you need to watch the details: he pulled her t shirt off when he first saw her, but then pulled the shirt off again in the living room. Who put it back on?
Nice set-up
A bit shorter than I am used to from you, and usually your spelling is spot on but this time you needed to edit a little more carefully. I don't think you will find much breakfast in a "frig". :)
A good set-up for more of the story.
Great Read
Love your stories and the different series you have going. Ignor the stupid comments that I see from people who want to inject reality into fantasy. As for the comments here. Frig is short for refrigerator (it's slang..duh) and if you read closer her shirt only came off once. Keep on writing TX, looking forward to the upcoming additions.
Keep it up!
Great story line. Details and spelling matter too.
To the fellow who doesn't know how to spell yet try to correct others, it's FRIDGE.
other things to ignore
You should also ignore comments from posters that can't differentiate the written difference between "slid her t-shirt up over her hips" and "pulled her shirt over her head". Sheesh, talk about details.....pay attention to what is written.
love series
amazing hot all the way. love cheating wives and wife then getting turned on. when does she get in with others?
lock the door
lovely comeback
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