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by eroticorgasm

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not bad but..

watch your person. There were a few times that it slipped from 3rd- to 1st-person mid-sentence and back again.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 12 years ago
hot scene...

But it would be soo much better to read if you'd had it proofread. Hope to see more from you soon.

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