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by Anonymous07/28/10

Not bad but..

watch your person. There were a few times that it slipped from 3rd- to 1st-person mid-sentence and back again.

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by GrrrreatImagination01/16/12

hot scene...

But it would be soo much better to read if you'd had it proofread. Hope to see more from you soon.

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