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A Summer I'll Never Forget Ch. 01

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by Anonymous07/28/10

WTF?

Where's the character building, the context, the mother fucking story for crying out loud? It's like getting the milk without buying the cow. You need to have a build up to the actual sex part or its not worth it.

This is the literary analogue to premature ejaculation.

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