Where's the character building, the context, the mother fucking story for crying out loud? It's like getting the milk without buying the cow. You need to have a build up to the actual sex part or its not worth it.
This is the literary analogue to premature ejaculation.
WTF?
Where's the character building, the context, the mother fucking story for crying out loud? It's like getting the milk without buying the cow. You need to have a build up to the actual sex part or its not worth it.
This is the literary analogue to premature ejaculation.
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