All Comments on 'Yard Work'

I enjoyed the word play back and forth. A bit more description, sounds that sort of thing would have made it a true winner. But, quite enjoyed reading this interesting little piece.

MF

I enjoyed this thoroughly. You might want to rework the scene when she takes her turn, make it last a bit longer. Other than that, quite a solid piece of work.

I really hope youre writing part two, I loved this!