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by Many Feathers07/28/10

Not bad...

I enjoyed the word play back and forth. A bit more description, sounds that sort of thing would have made it a true winner. But, quite enjoyed reading this interesting little piece.

MF

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by Ivy_Isley07/28/10

Thank you

I enjoyed this thoroughly. You might want to rework the scene when she takes her turn, make it last a bit longer. Other than that, quite a solid piece of work.

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by Anonymous08/02/10

hot really hot!

I really hope youre writing part two, I loved this!

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