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by Anonymous

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by Bradehoft07/31/10

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You could have made this into a 3 or 4 page hot story. But instead you cut it short. Shame on you

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by EMiamiRiverRat06/11/12

Nice one.

A hot little number is a great start to a day.

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by InfiniteFoldingSpace08/28/13

Great short story, except...

the last paragraph. It should have been a single sentence similar to "Hands down, it was the most awesome weekend of his college career."

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by rightbank08/01/14

this little flash is a fun read

I just wish we had more information the rest of the day.

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by Anonymous08/14/16

Nice!

Nice to hear about a young man willing to try things with a young woman for HER gratification instead of wham bam thank you ma'am!

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