The Taking of the Moon Maiden Ch. 08

You big Meanie!

I've been waiting and waiting for you to update this and you give me a little tiny tease...Wonderful tease though it is, there's lots of ground to cover.

Thanks for updating this story, I'm very glad to know you are still working on it.

Terrible Tease!!!!

Please please dont wait so long for the next update!!! We are on the edge of our seats and havent forgotten about your epic...and must know what happens!!! Great addition!

MORE!!

lol, you big tease!! lol. Please, i have been waiting so long for this chapter(s). Please dont keep us waiting too long! Its so sweet how things have been working out so nicely. I just wonder what the hell Duncan is planning (he is up to something--that much I know) lol.
Please wite the next chapter(s) as soon as you can...please!!!! Dont keeep us waiting as long as you have done. lol. I just love this story.

please! !!!!!

That was mean of you!! Lol such a tease! Lol I'm glad that her father love his grandchild. I. Love the she is beginning to trust the hubby.I think they are cute together!! :)
Please do not make us wait long for the nexy chapter!! Lol great chapter!
I hope the next one is a bit longer? Lol

More please

Nice snippet but more would be better. Especially since the gap in time between your submissions are quite long. Not a criticism, just letting you know how enjoyable your stories are and people look forward to reading them. Thanks for the update even if it's a mini.

I've really enjoyed this story. I like how Ronen has softened where she is concerned. It is clear that he loves her. I like that she has been able to learn to trust him too. Obviously she never was able to trust anyone but her sister to keep her and Moira safe. It would be real tough for her to trust Ronen especially since the men in her life have been so untrustworthy and showed them no care or protection. I love the infectious personality of Moira. I look forward to understanding more about this Moon Maiden. While it is clear she is the one, what does being the moon maiden mean? I hope that Ronen will continue to protect them, especially from Duncan. I hope that little bastard gets his ass kicked.

continue on

please continue on with more chapters... you left your fans hanging waiting to find out what Duncan is planning to do. you haven't written a chapter in months please write more. i need to know what happens

next chapter please

I first came across this story by accident. I have just finished reading all 8 chapters. BRING ON THE NEXT!!! I can see Daniel and Llewath(?) coming together. But I also see the death of Duncan by his own fathers' hand rather than Ronens.

This series is well written and I am intrigued at the amount of thought and research that has gone into this. I am a Scot myself and the grammar, clothing and general atmosphere is as close to perfect.

I look forward to reading more and I hope to see some similar story lines come about. Well Done!!

enjoyable

i am finding this story throughly enjoyable and wish there was more than the eight chapters that is here

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WOW!

This is a really good story, in general. I mean, like, super intense. :)

a bit of editing

Love your work. Try had gone instead of had went.