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There Used to Be a Ballpark

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/14/10

Good story.

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by Reindeer5808/14/10

Wonderful

Sensitively written, loved it. Obviously you've got a baseball background or a collaborator who does. One of the best in this genre that I've read. You've got my 5.

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by Anonymous08/14/10

Baseball Has Never Been Played So Romantically

But the flavor is real all th way to the bottom of the story. Thanks for a really good one.

D

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by Anonymous08/15/10

Once upon a time

I presume from the details, you have been there and done that, or at least have been close. Wonderfully well written piece. The feel is right, the story clean (altho one wonders a bit about even the Chicago PD with multiple righteous shootings) and I enjoyed it greatly. I now will attack the rest of your submissions...hopefully with the same result.

J in California

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by bruce2208/15/10

Delicious Offering

Interesting images both of people and things. Keep up the good work.

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by Handley_Page08/16/10

Beautiful

What a really nice story; well told and with a smile.

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by jenellesl09/19/15

Out of the park

Very well written. I love romance and this is a classic. It's amazing how you find what you're looking for when you stop looking. And yes, the kids do grow up way to fast.

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