As an author, I'm always sorry when I see that someone has written a nasty comment who has probably NEVER written a single thing. Your story has a ring of truth to it -- and demonstrates the reality that all of us yearn to be loved and further, that one can overcome the past with patience and support. Thanks!
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Anonymous08/14/10
Sorry
Sorry this is not one of your better stories there were some parts that left me a little confused. And to me the whole story seemed a little rushed.
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Anonymous12/30/13
Hard to read
For such a prolific author I am surprised by the amount of grammatical errors in your stories. I have tried to read quite a few of your works but find them hard to follow because of these mistakes. Please get an editor.
English
In the words of the Immortal Bard
Shit is Shit is Shit!
Great Start
As an author, I'm always sorry when I see that someone has written a nasty comment who has probably NEVER written a single thing. Your story has a ring of truth to it -- and demonstrates the reality that all of us yearn to be loved and further, that one can overcome the past with patience and support. Thanks!
Sorry
Sorry this is not one of your better stories there were some parts that left me a little confused. And to me the whole story seemed a little rushed.
Hard to read
For such a prolific author I am surprised by the amount of grammatical errors in your stories. I have tried to read quite a few of your works but find them hard to follow because of these mistakes. Please get an editor.
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