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Thats it
for me. I'm outta here!
Its getting a little lengthy
The stories gotta wrap up soon. I see some stories on this site go on for 20... 30 chapters? That's way too long. You're losing your readers dude. I'll be there for 2 or 3 more chapters max. Hope you wrap it up by then, if not, I'm sorry but it's getting tedious and boring now...
Either you like it or you don't!
Thanks for writing Bob, I know some people hate your stuff but I like most of it.
Keep it up, Bob
Your story line is excellent. I really enjoy it and can't wait to see more. Don't listen to those haters because they can't keep up. Write as long as you feel into it. I hope that after you bring Fran and Jake to a climax regarding their marriage, you'll keep writing abour Fran's exploits. Can't wait for the next installment.
Hey JPB, I gave this 4 stars at Ch.10 point because I like your writing, but . . .
Is this really all there is to Jake and Fran? After the first 2 chapters, I've been scanning instead of reading because it's the same thing chapter after chapter. I guess if that's your purpose, then you've succeeded. You may lose some followers, not that it matters.
I like your writing very much.
At third chapter I read the last lines, same for the fourth and fifth, now I just check to see if there is (continued).
Getting longwinded
These chapters keep repeating the same thing over and over. Is there a point?
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