You've foreshadowed it, you've built it up, keep it running to the next place.
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Anonymous08/03/10
Perhaps
Perhap the worst story ever.
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Anonymous08/04/10
ugh
you can do obetter than this.
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Anonymous08/05/10
you built the first story so well. Part 2 was a bit wham bam. Love to read some more but take your time and build the story again.
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Anonymous02/11/11
Finished already?
I don't think you put as much effort and talent into chapter 2 as you did 1. Hope you have chapter 3 started but please take your time and make it work.
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Anonymous10/13/13
man what a great story it was fantastice kee p writing about it and i will keep on reading these stories
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Keep it running.
You've foreshadowed it, you've built it up, keep it running to the next place.
Perhaps
Perhap the worst story ever.
ugh
you can do obetter than this.
you built the first story so well. Part 2 was a bit wham bam. Love to read some more but take your time and build the story again.
Finished already?
I don't think you put as much effort and talent into chapter 2 as you did 1. Hope you have chapter 3 started but please take your time and make it work.
man what a great story it was fantastice kee p writing about it and i will keep on reading these stories
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:-)
thought ch.2 would have more to it
Thanks for the upload
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