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21st Century Subterranean Slavery Pt. 04

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by rookie_5912/31/10

Reavantwo I love your writting Talent

I love this series so far and know I will like the rest of chapters. I have had lust in my loins since I started, reading the series. Please kept it up.

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by Anonymous02/25/11

this is a great read and i cant stop, its always enticing me to come back for more, and i hope you dont mind but i think you need to get someone to go over it as some times there are a few mistakes and some lines that dont make sense but other then that its an absolutly great sotry keep up the good work xxx
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