This is getting even more tedious. A lot of sex isn't much of a plot, it's more like a list. It would be more interesting if the characters were better developed. Even if, the whole premise of getting "even" is thin. Why wouldn't these two split or swing, doesn't seem like hubby would really care. It seems to be time to either wrap this up or start over.
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Unless the author is "getting even" with anyone misguided enough to still be reading this pointless drivel, why is he bothering to write it? IIt is boring, unduly repetitive, and the sex has all the eroticism of a brick wall. How long, O Lord, how long!
I decided to give JPB this last chapter to redeem the story line, or at least move it forward. Blah, blah, blah . . . just more of the same. I'm not wasting any more time on this series.
English
I got it all ready!
I'm gonnawait for the end before I open another chapter. I got the point a while ago.
Not much of a plot
This is getting even more tedious. A lot of sex isn't much of a plot, it's more like a list. It would be more interesting if the characters were better developed. Even if, the whole premise of getting "even" is thin. Why wouldn't these two split or swing, doesn't seem like hubby would really care. It seems to be time to either wrap this up or start over.
15 part series
A little hint, it does not get better.
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warhol
You know Warhol did some work like this. One was called "Sleep" It was an 8 hour film of someone sleeping. This is not as interesting.
Getting even?
Unless the author is "getting even" with anyone misguided enough to still be reading this pointless drivel, why is he bothering to write it? IIt is boring, unduly repetitive, and the sex has all the eroticism of a brick wall. How long, O Lord, how long!
shame shame on you bobbie
shit is shit..In diherrea it just keeps on dribbling out
Last chance & JPB blew it
I decided to give JPB this last chapter to redeem the story line, or at least move it forward. Blah, blah, blah . . . just more of the same. I'm not wasting any more time on this series.
gettn boring
this story started out pretty good but I'm affraid its gotten very boring. I hope the end is near.
3 more before it dies
He's got 3 more of these chapters to go before it finally dies a miserable death. You can stop the pain now if you go to SOL...
Sorry, JPB. But this is NOT a good story. You can do SO much better.
Hey folks, just read every third chapter and much of....
....the pain diminishes....not all, but much....
At least this chapter was different
so I gave it a 4.
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