Rattling Snakes Cage 2 Ch. 10

I love it

Please continue this story. It is great. I can't wait for more.

Ready for part 3 ...

... if Snake keels over and everyone else gets to lounge with their haul! You are so good at writing these that I'm not sure if I can stand another 10 chapters (and days!) of nail biting to find anyone but Snake back in prison or dead. Totally hoping that blasted Snake keels over right quickly!!

Part 3 Please!

part 3 please!

Please, please, please let Snake get an infection and die! I can't stand him! Let them live in peace!!

rattling snkaecage

i would love to see part 3 keep writing

i'm with the rest and "demand" part 3, this is nerve wrecking, does snake have 9 cat lives or what? but i'm glad they're back together now, that's something good :)

I hope Snake gets bit

I enjoyed the story. I do love how you make us want Snake so dead. I kind of was hoping that the little red headed girl would go to the hospital and sneak in snakes room and finish him...sigh. I guess not.
I would love a 3rd story.

yikes

i mean kill Snake. He is one bad bad person.

Nice writing as always. :) i do not mind reading part 3, and a happier ending. haha!

A testimony ...

It is a testimony to your writing skills that I even read ALL of Part 1, let alone Part 2. I have enjoyed your other writings but had my doubts about this one when it started, but couldn't seem to not read it ... all because of how well you write. I was concerned about whether I could handle Part 2, but you did tone it down a good bit for those who don't care for a lot of the violence. Thank you for that. It was well written, and I came back looking for each chapter. Must admit I was glad to see we were getting to the end, but had to laugh when Snake didn't die and that left the door open for a Part 3. All I can say is this ... if you write it, I will read it. :-)
Thank you for sharing your talents. You are a wonderful story teller.

Definitely!

Absolutely want to see a part 3! Even though I like this ending with Rachel and Patrick together, I hope if you continue, you will still let them live happily ever after :)

More, more, more!

HMM...

These connecting stories remind me of a couple of Guy Ritchie movies: "Snatch" and "Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels." It is a good thing I liked those movies and your stories.

MORE!

YAY MORE MORE MORE!!! :) This was great!!! I just started to read rattling snakes and...I've seen you posted it but eh, didn't read it. And out of the blue I decided to read it and I'm sooooo glad that I did! I could not stop reading it!!! I've read both stories in...2 days (work showed its ugly head to postpone a little lol)
I WOULD LOVEEEEE to read more of their adventure :)