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Question..
Is it really necessary that this be continued?
Why do I get the feeling ...
that Jake actually knows what's up and is running a game on her?
As long as you keep this peice of shit up. I can keep going with
the negative comments. I will check each day to give you a 1
Is there a point to this?
It's been dragging pretty long now. This could have been done in 3-4 pieces to get to this point; unless you have some twist to the end...Like he has known about her infidelility...suspected that before the cancelled weekend trip. That he was actually faithful until that first weekend....and he actually has been planning on leaving the company with his cheating boss and son, move to Atlanta and divorce her. I guess I'll check to see how this ends up.
LOL here !
JPB, are you just having fun with your readers ? I read the critical comments and note that the critics keep reading. I agree that "Wedding Planner" is dragging on, but it has become a bit of daily humor.
Thanks :))
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