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Ray's Ring Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/03/10

keep going!

Please write longer chapters and more of them!
Great story so far.
Can't wait to read more!

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by digdaddyrich07/23/11

It reads as if he is beginning to know his powers

An interesting read, a little spooky but still a good read.

Thanks

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