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Ray's Ring Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/10/10

Good story

You do need to edit it a bit as you swapped names between Ray and Harry a few times.

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by digdaddyrich07/24/11

Kinky

Every young man would like to have those abilities, especially the ability to control his woman's orgasm.

Good chapter, hot and erotic. Thanks for the chapter

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