All Comments on 'The Silent Girl'

Sad but interesting till the end.

Was interesting in a bizare way and well written. Left me with alot of questions though, which isn't always a bad thing.

Completely bizarre, but still good in a way that is not easy to write out. Keep up the good work, as anything that makes you think is a success.

I'm still not sure whether or not I like this submission. Very well written, and truly- Truly- bizarre. Still, for what its worth, you got 100 from me

I almost quit reading it several times, but decided to finish it. It was very well written and it got a 5 even though I didn't like the story and wouldn't have read it had I known it was just a venture into the weird.

This story is hardcore BDSM, and should have been submitted in that category. The only reason I read this story is that it was in the "Sci-Fi & Fantasy" cat and had an "E" rating. But after having read it I think I need to take a shower.

Didn't think it was gross at all. Understand it isn't everyone's cup of tea but I thought it was lovely in a bizarre kind of way. Keep up the wonderful work!-J

I agree that this is BDSM and should have been categorized as such. I read this solely to see what kind of story it takes to get an editor's pick. Now I don't think I will read editors' picks again.

We never hear how he dealt with his violent streak that initially prevented him from gaining any social success. Being smart could get you rich, but also being a violent, knife-wielding girl-stabber means you wouldn't get further than the state penitentiary.

And the pimp just let her go? What? Pimps don't let anyone go. It gives the other, um, employees too many ideas. Pimps take the bribes and then stab people who try to take their goods. I would have had a better time believing a SWAT team storming the building with tear gas.

well as people have said this hard core it is NOT sci-fi and fantasy but BDSM if it had been put in the correct area this would have been a much better read. since it wasn`t it lost so much of what it could have been

An eye for the grotesque. I'm not shocked that the editors at Literotica are a little twisted. I need them to twist, so the rest of us can keep an eye on up and down, left and right. Thank you for writing, and thank you for drawing our eyes to the story.

ignore those comments! if it was too grotesque for you people then you should have stopped reading. oh, what the girl who can heal herself belongs in bdsm? Maybe you should search up the dictionaries on what exactly bdsm is. There are far more worser stories categorised in the wrong genres. Like reading a story categorised as love and then finding out the mothers fucking the son.

Oh-dear, wasn't going to comment, but now I feel the need to respond to other comments.<br/>

Again, I read this story because it was filed under SciFi. Would it have been properly categorised under BDSM? Probably not, it would have been flamed down for the "Unrealistic, healing girl". Is it Sci-Fi/Fantasy? yes, though covering knife play topics. Would it also have fit in the non-human category? Probably.<br/>

I would say that it is always hard to categorise stories that could fit into multiple places.<br/>

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On the story itself, it was thought provoking. Would the main character have boon locked away for cutting people up? yes if he did it to un-consenting people or in the UK, but the indications were that he spent his time alone instead. So he was just considered creepy.

This was weird, but not BDSM because of the strange qualities of it. It was a creepy story, certainly.

A unique and strangely mesmerizing story.

Strange, macabre, intriguing, good.

This didn't turn me on sexually, but it was unbelievably /sensual/ given how macabre it was. I really love this story.

So weird, but beautifully written. Hints of an extremely violent 'Blade Runner' or some such noire styled tale. Love it.