For the last 5 or 6 chapters I have just gone to the last paragraph to see if the story has moved on, but no, just more of the same. I cannot be bothered reading about more of her cheating exploits. We know she is a cheating slut and hubby is an absolute f***wit. Please JPB, do something - torch the bitch, kill the idiot husband off or simply nuke the whole story. Bored silly.
I read this story a long time ago. This is not a new one.
I don't remember who wrote it but it also dragged on and on for many chapters. But the revenge in this story far out weighs the crime. She is just a slut.
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was that the plot moving forward?
For just a second I thought the plot moved forward. I was wrong. Is that the twist you are going for?
please finish the story NOW
13ch about the samething... is boring... finish the story ....
The twist is that the plot never goes forward
The entire story just twists in the wind....
Bloody Hell!
For the last 5 or 6 chapters I have just gone to the last paragraph to see if the story has moved on, but no, just more of the same. I cannot be bothered reading about more of her cheating exploits. We know she is a cheating slut and hubby is an absolute f***wit. Please JPB, do something - torch the bitch, kill the idiot husband off or simply nuke the whole story. Bored silly.
I read this story a long time ago. This is not a new one.
I don't remember who wrote it but it also dragged on and on for many chapters. But the revenge in this story far out weighs the crime. She is just a slut.
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