The Wedding Planner Ch. 15

they are not enough words in the english language to describe how awful this story is

deplorable
execrable
miserable,
woeful
wretched
uncomfortable
suffering
unhappy
despicable
ugly
vile
slimy
unworthy
worthless
hapless
miserable
misfortunate
pathetic
piteous
pitiable
pitiful
poor

Turkey

The turkey is dead.

You have become a real asshole

Didn't read only voted a 1

I gave this a 3/5 because it is finally over!

This story lasted 14 chapters too long. I did like a couple things, but this was mainly repetitive and soulless.

what a shit of story

if is for me i will give it a -5
if one of the lovers will tell to someone jack will know.
if i was one of the lovers will tell to the husband only for help another man.
if i was jack i will kill her in a sec.
i hate whores win.
and nobody will married a whore. she will stay in the town ...divorced for fuck
yes to married... no way.
your stupid story is.... the whore is good ... the whores win. and a husband is
a stupid cow.
the story make me sick. :(
13 of the chapters was a waste of time only the patetic revege of a whore.
try not to do again, please.
in my country the revenge is passional not a cold and hearthless thing.
you have a revenge one or twice not will all the town, is stupid.
and after that you get a divorce.... no a stolen everything and more.
well thanks to your fucking country in spain is the same all for women nothing
for man.
she found is goood to be a whore.... that's what you said... a bad ending.

For shit's sake!

Don't know what you have been drinking but I sure as hell never want even a sip of it. That has to be the worst story with the most pathetic ending ever. How it took you 15 bloody chapters to get there is beyond comprehension. You have written so much good stuff then get involved in crap like this. Sorry, but it simply didn't cut the mustard for me and obviously for others as well. A great waste of time.

Well it wasn't your best effort

I've liked a lot of your stuff but this really wasn't up to scratch. You took 15 chapters to tell a tale that should have been told in 3 at most. Pretty much all the Characters in the story were irredeemable and one dimensional. Nothing really happened beyond the basic concept and I think you can do a lot better then this and have done much better previously.
The premise was reasonable but it went downhill from there due to the incredibly slow storyline development.
In summary it wasn't really worthy of the usual direct, concise, no nonsense style that JPB readers enjoy.

Much too long.

JPB, I like most of your stories, but this one went on much too long. If it wasn't for the repetitive scenes, i would have scored it higher.

Sometimes You gotta Sweat out a fever

I think that this story was a nessecary evil for "Bob". He had to get these ideas out of his head. Yes I feel like I helpped a friend not drown in the toliet after a major binge. Sometimes you have to take bad times to enjoy the better times. It is over I put this story down to a bit of bad sushi. The bout of dysentary is over.

Keep writing "Bob".

wedding Planner

This has to be the worst story you have ever written and then to let the cheating whores and pimps get the upper hand is too much I absolutely hate this ending I think my 5 year old Georgia Bull Dog Moe could come up with a better ending Larry

Just Plain Bad

plot too short for story
story too long for plot
ending too insignificant for characters

But... I am a JPB fan, so I will keep reading.
Sometimes you get a cold burger and fries at McD's

ugh

I am convinced that JPB is actually Just Plain Bernice!

that is the only reason I can think of why JPB always invariably has the male lead get fucked..:) Once again, as in so many of his stories there is no sympathetic character, no right/wrong (however one defines it), and no satisfaction at the end.

I know why I read them. I just can't for the life of me figure out why she writes them. :)

Hey Bob!!!

Is this your turd of the month???????? Keep them coming buddy your stories are good reads even the wacked ones.

One of the worst efforts on this site!

Not quite as long winded as others "saga epics" but boring as hell.

My God!

This...dragged. The pacing was horrible! The story didn't develop, the characters didn't develop. The sex scenes became repetitive.

Way too fucking long and pointless. I came in anticpating something substantial. This wasn't it.

Chagrined

I think that inappropriate and wrong.

JPB seems to have three story archs:

1) Revenge Porn. Someone done someone wrong and they are getting back. Ususally it's a guy getting fucked by his wife, but in this case, it's a woman. And it's poorly written. Like the good ones

2) The Cuck story: Same as above but the guy likes it! Not so much for me

3) Everything else. Haven't tried them.

Way too long; too many chapters

And not very logical. She is almost 10 years too old to be that desirable. Now if she was 18 or even 20 she could sell her pussy. At 20 women sell it; at 30 they give it away; and at 40 they buy it. Since she is close to 30, her pussy would not be worth much.

I read every word...

every damn single word. Running the London Marathon didn't take as long and was less tiring. I stuck at it out of stupid loyalty to JPB who usually entertains me. It might have got better. It didn't. If it was a song it would be a dirge.
We have a song in football grounds in England. It goes:- "What a load of rubbish, what a load of rubb..." You get the idea.

OMG, just when I thought I'd read your worst work!!!

Well, well, well, another female POV and another shitty story. Go figure. At least, this does nothing to disspell the notion that your stories are either great (Dark Trilogy, etc.) or super shitty with very little in between.

Happy

I didn't read all of this. Quick read of first 2 chapters and then to the last.

A true slut wife

It could have been a few chapters shorter. And I find it hard to believe that one cheater (Jake) couldn't recognize another cheater (his wife). And I'm totally convinced that a good PI would have easily dug up evidence of her infidelities as so many people knew about them and the first place he would have looked at was the hotel. With all that said, if I were Jake, I would have set up one of JPB's special revenge dishes and seen to it that she ate it. Although, turning his wife into a total slut that will sooner or later catch a social disease isn't bad revenge in and of itself.

Overthefalls

A mere 14 chapters shorter would do.

Just love stories where neither character is worth the crap they flush down the toilet.

Agree with FD45

Pointless and far too long.

Besides being too long

I find it impossible to believe Jake didn't know about her cheating. She was way too blatant about it. I think he'd hired a PI and when she served him he just smiled. He counter sued using adultery and proceeded to ruin her by suing the Hotel and her lovers. I think he sent copies of her activities to all her family and friends. He headed off to Atlanta with 70% of the assets. She slunk away in disgrace.

Highly iunlikely

Al most all of JustPlain Bob's stories are well thought out tis one is the exception, it has only one of the 15 chapters that is worth reading. Thirteen of the chapters have an all too familiar theme differing fromone another only slightly

Just ugly people leading ugly lives.

How erotic, exciting, or entertaining this that?

bad sushi

good slut

I'm shocked!

Usually your stories are so awesome and this one sucked ass! It was like 13 chapters too fucking long and repetitive as hell!