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Having done the pee in the ass trick I know it is not easy. I'm surprised Bella didn't come more.
I others don't want you to continue "Fuck-um if they can't take a joke."
These characters are delicious.
More BDSM and a wedding orgy with a Tranny preacher. Hmm so many possibilities and don't forget Bella's relatives.
These characters deserve a book or two.
Don't short-change the work you've done so far.
It's not often we see a story with such a different angle, an I for one woulld love it to continue. You've done a great job of integrating the 'fetish' with some truly hot sex and creating characters that we can go along with in their explorations. Don't let your readers laziness in voting convince you that this is not worth continuing - it is chapter 13 after all :)
If you do decide to wrap things up, I really hope you'll take your time (story-wise) and do justice to what you've already created.
Thanks for a great read - whatever you decide.
A. Fan.
Hey
Great job. Take all the time you need.
keep it going!
I hope you keep this going as long as you can - and definitely leave it open for a continuation!
Don't Stop - Please Don't Stop
Great characters - great story - please continue
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