Loretta and Andrei and absolutely passionate together and I just loved, LOVED that chase scene in the office. You never cease to amaze me, Jaz. This was fantastic. I have already been sucked in and can’t wait to see what you do with this couple.
The last installment of this world? RIGHT. I think you have a few more spin offs to churn out!
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Anonymous08/06/10
Yay!!!
You are the best. Thanks for another great story. Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
That was amazing!! Absolutely loved it!!!Although I still don't think she would die if he bit her, as she has his blood in her veins so I don't think him drinking her blood would kill her! Oh well I will just have to wait and see if they figure that out for themselves! Don't ever stop writting Jaz you are to damn good at it!
Willie
What an opener!! I think I'm in heaven being back in this world. Hmm I don't think we are going to let you give this up with out a fight so start thinking of another sequel!!!! Need more, want more, please more!!!!!
Un-freakn-believable, how in the hell do you do it? Every time I read one of your stories I am overwhelmed by your talent and imagination. When I doubt that you can top any of your previous work you go and pull this out of your hat! Sensational, I am really looking forward to finding out how these two couples develop. I'm simply taken with the world you have created and I am honoured that you have let myself and many others be a part of it. I'm deeply saddened that this story will be the last we hear of these characters who have become very dear to my heart, but understand that all things must and do eventually come to an end. I am and will continue to be a loyal fan of you and your work.
I enjoyed the beginning so much. Everyone else said it all but I wanted to let you know we appreciate the sharing of your talent of writing.
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Anonymous08/06/10
So very hot!
Just when I thought that I could go to bed early I find this sexy story. So now I send you much love for your fab story but my husband sends all his good wishes as I am not going to sleep for other things are now on my mind,
Its not fair that Alexie gets shipped off a land far far away for revealing a secret to Cedar when Andrei did the same thing. . . But I guess being Council Elect has its benefits
Well, you got started right off, didn't you? Thought you were taking a break. ;) I thought Loretta was taller, but she must just have a lot of personality. Nice start, looking forward to more.
Give me more woman!1! I'm sooo friggin thrilled that you are writing another in this were/vamp world! I love this chapter...hot and steamy! Lol I loved it when they were playing chase. That was hot....they should do it again maybe in a forest or something lol not confined to an office...but I'm not complaining :)
Can't wait for the next one :)
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Anonymous08/06/10
not so!!!
surely mates are immune please say it so and what about cedar and alexei????????????????????????????????????????
I need a fan. That was steamy. Love Andrei and the cocky arrogance. Love that Loretta is living on the wild side. Can't wait to see how they work it all out. You're on fire! Next chapter please!
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Anonymous08/06/10
Do I even need to ask?
I want more... I NEED more. This is simply amazing! I seriously cant wait for the next chapter to come.... or should I say chapters. Either way, your writing is so hot! Keep it coming. You have a lot of people waiting.
that was kinda like...WOW!! but only fifty times better than that! im so so so happy your writing the twins story! its probably the most exciting begining to a story yet! more please..oh so much more!!
About frigging time! I have been waiting since the conclusion of When Worlds Collide.......I absolutely LOVED it. Keep doing that darn thing you do and I will continue to wait for each post faithfully.
I loved it. The way Loretta and Andrei get together is hot. I didn't realize I came to the end of the story until I couldn't make the page advance. I was so caught up in the excitiment.
Its wonderful that you're writing another story so soon, I just knew you couldn't leave us-your devoted followers-waiting forever. :) Hhhmmm new council members? Investigation? I sense a whole lot of trouble brewing for the double death twins.
This chapter rocked. It lived up to my high expectations for a story about the twins. Can't wait to see Alexei enter the picture. I love how he couldn't keep from telling her more than he should even after knowing it would go back to Jared. I loved the chase scene. I missed at first that she had shifted and wondered how the hell she could escape him. It was a perfect way for them to start off and you definitely brought out the fireworks that we'd expect between intense 'people'. At the edge of my seat waiting for more! Keep it up Jaz. I expect this to be more intense than the rest of the series and filled with unexpected twists given the taboo nature of their relationships. Can't wait to be kept on edge!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! This story was just as intense and awesome as the others - I can't wait for more!!
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Anonymous08/07/10
Loved it !
What a great opening chapter :) Their meeting definitely was up to my expectations ! I hope you will keep writing and if the muse strikes you to continue with this line of characters!! Looking forward to all of this story and many more with or without these characters !!! Keep up the great work
First of all I agree with Katlady there are more stories besides Cedar and Loretta and I definetly want to know what happened to Nors and his little wolf. But Bravo for the opening on the Council and I cant wait for Alexai and Cedar. This was so good girl keep it up and more please......
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Anonymous08/08/10
Awesome!
I loved it! This was a great story and opening chapter to the Council. You definitely had me on my toes and also reminiscing about what happened before and now anticipating more from Andrei and Loretta, as well as Alexei and Cedar, and of course, Caleb, Jared and gang! I'd love to read about Jared's babies, how Demetri and Mara, and Rafe and Lacy are doing, and Nors and his little she-wolf too! Can't wait for Ch. 02!!! Please post soon and keep up the fabulous writing!!
Why you little stinker!!! I had no idea you were gonna start writing again so soon!!! But Im loving it!!!! My Jazzy is back with a vengance!!!!!!!!!! Groupie love!!!!!!!
Not that you were gone for all that long...
A grand opening for a new story, though I too doubt that you'll never write another story in this world. Something always risks turning up.
That said, there are other worlds whose stories can be told and I'll look forward to seeing those too.
It seems a shame that such a gulf has built between the two sides, I hope that there is a shower down by the office or the Vamps may decide that he isn't suitable as a councillor!
You have done a fantastic job depicting the difference between what the heart wants and what the brain says is the right choice. It is awesome how you are able to bring the inner stuggles and turmoils to life in your characters. It really brings home the internal conflicts we each balance within ourselves between our mind and what we allow the rest of the world to see. I absolutely love watching your characters fight giving in to the vulnerability of letting someone else into their heart. It really does make it that much more satisfying when they finally relent. I knew this was going to be good, but you have exceeded my expectations. This is a very impressive start to what I am sure is to be a great tale.
I finally got the time to finish When Worlds Collide, and then I saw this new story! I was super excited lol. I can't wait to see what happens with the twins and the wolves. Keep up the good work :)
You packed so much into so few pages,I'm not sure where to start. Except to say Hot characters, with a Hot past and okay some pretty Hot foreplay leading up to some intense Hot sex. And it sounds like it's only to get Hotter
Great first chapter! Sometimes I'm in awe of your ability. I looked at all your submitted stories and wondered if somebody has you chained to a computer lol. Do you need help? Blink twice for yes :)
Seriously though not only am I amazed at how fast you write but also how great the quality is. What's your secret? I will let you think about it while I go devour the rest of the chapters!
You did it again. I was thouroughly captivated from the opening paragraph. You built the sensual tension between them until the inevitable became the inescapable. Wonderfull!
I actually sighed out ooooh yeahhhh when Andrei first kissed her, which normally only happens when I'm having sex myself, or eating really, really good nachos. This is one scalding hot start to a series!
English
Hot Damn!!!
Thought you got me with Demetri! Boy was I wrong!
Loretta and Andrei and absolutely passionate together and I just loved, LOVED that chase scene in the office. You never cease to amaze me, Jaz. This was fantastic. I have already been sucked in and can’t wait to see what you do with this couple.
The last installment of this world? RIGHT. I think you have a few more spin offs to churn out!
Yay!!!
You are the best. Thanks for another great story. Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
=)
FUCKING AH-MAZING!!!!
I hope you never stop writing! Amazing!
OMG Jaz!!!
That was amazing!! Absolutely loved it!!!Although I still don't think she would die if he bit her, as she has his blood in her veins so I don't think him drinking her blood would kill her! Oh well I will just have to wait and see if they figure that out for themselves! Don't ever stop writting Jaz you are to damn good at it!
Willie
Ooops!! That should have read ...she wouldn't die..
last one in this series? i'm not so sure about that.
this was absolute a wonderful opening chapter.
the office scene was pure bliss and a joy to read.
Demitri is still my number one, but these are coming close.
more, more, more, more. .... (you get the point, right?)
Wow!! What a hot couple!!
Jeez Jaz I did not realize how freakin hot Andrei and Loretta would be, I can not wait to see where this story goes... Fantastic
HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT
What an opener!! I think I'm in heaven being back in this world. Hmm I don't think we are going to let you give this up with out a fight so start thinking of another sequel!!!! Need more, want more, please more!!!!!
Amazing!! FROM START TO FINISH, pure Hotness!
I love it! Wow that was hot! *drooling hard core* lol. . You never seize to amaze!
OMG
Un-freakn-believable, how in the hell do you do it? Every time I read one of your stories I am overwhelmed by your talent and imagination. When I doubt that you can top any of your previous work you go and pull this out of your hat! Sensational, I am really looking forward to finding out how these two couples develop. I'm simply taken with the world you have created and I am honoured that you have let myself and many others be a part of it. I'm deeply saddened that this story will be the last we hear of these characters who have become very dear to my heart, but understand that all things must and do eventually come to an end. I am and will continue to be a loyal fan of you and your work.
Well done
I enjoyed the beginning so much. Everyone else said it all but I wanted to let you know we appreciate the sharing of your talent of writing.
So very hot!
Just when I thought that I could go to bed early I find this sexy story. So now I send you much love for your fab story but my husband sends all his good wishes as I am not going to sleep for other things are now on my mind,
This is my second round lol =)
Its not fair that Alexie gets shipped off a land far far away for revealing a secret to Cedar when Andrei did the same thing. . . But I guess being Council Elect has its benefits
:)
wooo hooo Jazz your at it again.
Wow am loving the twins (hoping your going to cover both in this story) and Loretta so deserves some loving.
Very hot story and fantastic writing as ever,
Sol (Jazz' number 1 groupie) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Nice Job
Well, you got started right off, didn't you? Thought you were taking a break. ;) I thought Loretta was taller, but she must just have a lot of personality. Nice start, looking forward to more.
more! more!
Give me more woman!1! I'm sooo friggin thrilled that you are writing another in this were/vamp world! I love this chapter...hot and steamy! Lol I loved it when they were playing chase. That was hot....they should do it again maybe in a forest or something lol not confined to an office...but I'm not complaining :)
Can't wait for the next one :)
not so!!!
surely mates are immune please say it so and what about cedar and alexei????????????????????????????????????????
Ummm... is it me or is it HOT in here?
I need a fan. That was steamy. Love Andrei and the cocky arrogance. Love that Loretta is living on the wild side. Can't wait to see how they work it all out. You're on fire! Next chapter please!
Do I even need to ask?
I want more... I NEED more. This is simply amazing! I seriously cant wait for the next chapter to come.... or should I say chapters. Either way, your writing is so hot! Keep it coming. You have a lot of people waiting.
hells yeah!!
that was kinda like...WOW!! but only fifty times better than that! im so so so happy your writing the twins story! its probably the most exciting begining to a story yet! more please..oh so much more!!
Do I have to ask?
Two words: Freaking Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
About frigging time! I have been waiting since the conclusion of When Worlds Collide.......I absolutely LOVED it. Keep doing that darn thing you do and I will continue to wait for each post faithfully.
oooohhhhh that was good
I loved it. The way Loretta and Andrei get together is hot. I didn't realize I came to the end of the story until I couldn't make the page advance. I was so caught up in the excitiment.
You're Back!!!
I am so glad that you are back and writing!!! I was afraid that we would be waiting a lot longer for this story!!
Welcome back
Its wonderful that you're writing another story so soon, I just knew you couldn't leave us-your devoted followers-waiting forever. :) Hhhmmm new council members? Investigation? I sense a whole lot of trouble brewing for the double death twins.
wow!
this is hot!! not a lot of drama but hot hot hot. i like!! welcome back!!
Loved it
of course :D
I wish that this isn't your last, but your probably right about that five year thing, hahaha
Oh my!
Wow! Just hasn't been the same without you. Fanfreakingtastic!
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHH!"
Is all I can say for my lack of words.
How is this the last story of the series?
There were at least 2 other stories besides Loretta and Cedar.
What a great start !!!
Well this story certainly got off with a very BIG bang.
Pun intended !!!
:>)
I look forward to the next chapters.
VC
Intense Like the Two of Them!
This chapter rocked. It lived up to my high expectations for a story about the twins. Can't wait to see Alexei enter the picture. I love how he couldn't keep from telling her more than he should even after knowing it would go back to Jared. I loved the chase scene. I missed at first that she had shifted and wondered how the hell she could escape him. It was a perfect way for them to start off and you definitely brought out the fireworks that we'd expect between intense 'people'. At the edge of my seat waiting for more! Keep it up Jaz. I expect this to be more intense than the rest of the series and filled with unexpected twists given the taboo nature of their relationships. Can't wait to be kept on edge!
brilliant!
LOVING IT!
yea!!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! This story was just as intense and awesome as the others - I can't wait for more!!
Loved it !
What a great opening chapter :) Their meeting definitely was up to my expectations ! I hope you will keep writing and if the muse strikes you to continue with this line of characters!! Looking forward to all of this story and many more with or without these characters !!! Keep up the great work
Oh Hell Yes!
First of all I agree with Katlady there are more stories besides Cedar and Loretta and I definetly want to know what happened to Nors and his little wolf. But Bravo for the opening on the Council and I cant wait for Alexai and Cedar. This was so good girl keep it up and more please......
Awesome!
I loved it! This was a great story and opening chapter to the Council. You definitely had me on my toes and also reminiscing about what happened before and now anticipating more from Andrei and Loretta, as well as Alexei and Cedar, and of course, Caleb, Jared and gang! I'd love to read about Jared's babies, how Demetri and Mara, and Rafe and Lacy are doing, and Nors and his little she-wolf too! Can't wait for Ch. 02!!! Please post soon and keep up the fabulous writing!!
Im getting the goose bumps again!!!!!!
Why you little stinker!!! I had no idea you were gonna start writing again so soon!!! But Im loving it!!!! My Jazzy is back with a vengance!!!!!!!!!! Groupie love!!!!!!!
Welcome Back Jaz!
Not that you were gone for all that long...
A grand opening for a new story, though I too doubt that you'll never write another story in this world. Something always risks turning up.
That said, there are other worlds whose stories can be told and I'll look forward to seeing those too.
It seems a shame that such a gulf has built between the two sides, I hope that there is a shower down by the office or the Vamps may decide that he isn't suitable as a councillor!
--
-ShadowedDreams
Excellent work, Jaz!
You have done a fantastic job depicting the difference between what the heart wants and what the brain says is the right choice. It is awesome how you are able to bring the inner stuggles and turmoils to life in your characters. It really brings home the internal conflicts we each balance within ourselves between our mind and what we allow the rest of the world to see. I absolutely love watching your characters fight giving in to the vulnerability of letting someone else into their heart. It really does make it that much more satisfying when they finally relent. I knew this was going to be good, but you have exceeded my expectations. This is a very impressive start to what I am sure is to be a great tale.
love it!
Glad to see this series continue :D
awesome!
I finally got the time to finish When Worlds Collide, and then I saw this new story! I was super excited lol. I can't wait to see what happens with the twins and the wolves. Keep up the good work :)
HOT
You packed so much into so few pages,I'm not sure where to start. Except to say Hot characters, with a Hot past and okay some pretty Hot foreplay leading up to some intense Hot sex. And it sounds like it's only to get Hotter
OMG!!!!!!
6:30 in the morning is to early to read something that hot, when you are alone. Please Keep Writing!!!!!!!
Ok starting to catch up!
Great first chapter! Sometimes I'm in awe of your ability. I looked at all your submitted stories and wondered if somebody has you chained to a computer lol. Do you need help? Blink twice for yes :)
Seriously though not only am I amazed at how fast you write but also how great the quality is. What's your secret? I will let you think about it while I go devour the rest of the chapters!
simply incredible.
You did it again. I was thouroughly captivated from the opening paragraph. You built the sensual tension between them until the inevitable became the inescapable. Wonderfull!
LOL
Great characters. Sweet Loretta and gentle Andrei. LOL Great writing.
Nice "final" series!
As I'm re-reading this, I'm smiling after reading your declaration about how this is your "final" series. Glad you kept on writing!
dang, girlfriend
I actually sighed out ooooh yeahhhh when Andrei first kissed her, which normally only happens when I'm having sex myself, or eating really, really good nachos. This is one scalding hot start to a series!
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