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A Demon's Captive

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by bdsmbill08/17/10

Do some research...

Wiccans do not believe in the Devil, Demons, or the existence of hell. Sorry, you should have done your homework before slandering a religion you obviously know nothing about.

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by HellsSpawn09/02/10

Sorry

I would like to apologise to all Wiccans and anyone else who may be upset by what I said. I have a very close wiccan friend and I guess I must have misinterpereted their religion. I realize now that I should have chosen a better religion, and should truly have done more reaserch. Thanks for helping me realize this. And I honestly did not mean to slander the religion, and I apologise of any who took offense to it.

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by Last_Breath09/11/10

Ah, the dreaded research

Yes, I have once fallen prone to this. At the time, I don't know if it was writer's fatigue, or negligence on my part but it is a lesson well learned. Despite the incorrect use of said religious sect I liked this story. I do hope to read more entertaining stories from you.

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by Anonymous11/04/12

gay sex?

you couldent leave gay sex out? :( it was still kinda good,next time leave dude on dude out of it tho

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by Anonymous02/27/13

Whats wrong with gay Sex?

Do you have a problem with it? If so, you can go bite yourself, it was a beautifully written story , even if its a porn one, and there was nothing he needs to change.

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