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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is NOT a Five Star Story

This is AT LEAST a ten star story. Wow!

Kaiyandom, welcome to Literotica! Your recent stories have all been excellent and exciting. This website has a new star writing for it now!

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
Sorry

Get your tenses and POVs right, and you will be a fine author in time.

mslv4Hermslv4Herover 13 years ago
Excellent

Your capture of how a Femdom can control a submissive, getting him to do things to himself that wouldn't have believed he could have done, even from miles away is just exquisite. You captured it perfectly. Thank You.

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