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Nicole's Secret Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/08/10

Lots of glaring mistakes that cannot be ignored

Your story would have been readable if you have taken the time out to check your grammar and spelling mistakes. It's too glaring to dismiss it. I can't continue to read it no matter how good the storyline was if the mistakes were so plentiful.

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by DragosLove08/08/10

I Disagree

Lot of grammatical errors, but nothing that makes it unreadable. I highly recommend getting an editor, but am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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by Bob_Aganoush08/16/10

I'm with the second poster

Until you clean up the spelling and grammatical errors, it's too difficult to read.

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