All Comments on 'Manny and Christina Ch. 01'

A longer chapter would have got U a 5 outa 5 I hate 100 word essay chapters.

There might be a good story hiding in there, but it is tough to get past the writing.

you didnt tell us much about either of them and it was way too short! i'd love to read the story but with longer chapters please!

That was a good first story you should totally make a chapter 2!and oh yeah this is yo bro