The first time she kissed and was fingered she had a choice...guilt feelings, love for hubby and quit the gang or...
...or, she kept on doing it and more.
Divorce, she already cheated and as her friend pointed out...she really, REALLY wanted to play - ALL THE WAY!!!
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Anonymous03/10/15
Why would he let her make the decision?
That makes no sense. He knows what she's doing. He knows what she wants to do. And he knows he doesn't want that. With no kids why is he even questioning the decision to divorce her? Just get the attorney, file and move on. Nothing to see here folks.
JPB is a manifestation of quantum uncertainty in the universe.
Like Schroedinger's cat, both alive and dead until someone opens the box.
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Anonymous05/03/15
Overrated?
As a writer JPB is good, he can tell the story with proficiency but that is the end of it.
His characters may be real but I do not like them, this husband is the prime example. The wife already made her decision, she cheated, and he is acting as she did not.
In any case, thank you for the writing, as stated before from a technical point of view is good.
Several commenters have said, correctly in my view, that she will choose him.
But as I said in my prior comment, it is NOT enough simply to choose not to complete her cheating - she HAS to confess the FULL extent of what she has done, including blow jobs that are so intense that she doesn't even noticed she's being fucked!
And yes, he SHOULD get copies of his recordings to the other husbands and wives.
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Anonymous09/23/15
He left the choice up to her?
Why? She's guilty of cheating, plain and simple. She's playing games with him and hiding her true feelings. She wants to cheat. No trusting her going forward. Time for a divorce, his choice , not hers. It would have been nice had you written that ending Bob. Or any ending for that matter. I thought I'd confirm your prologue so you didn't feel bad.
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Anonymous12/29/15
Well, nothing like insulting the reader even before the story starts.
This so called writer is so arrogant he feels the need to insult his readers by telling them if they are looking for a complete story they lack imagination. If I want to use my imagination to write my own ending to a story then I might as well write the rest of the story as well.
I was going to read this but after reading the prologue I decided to give the author one star for lacking the imagination to finish the damn story!
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Anonymous03/09/16
time to go nuclear
He already warned Ryan about not telling everything, so he needs to tell ALL spouses about Thursdays, then visit Ryan again and leave him tied and hurt. Then tell wifey to go with HER crowd because she does not belong in HIS life anymore !
But we all know Bob wont let that happen
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Anonymous05/10/16
Just Finish The Story
Come on.....finish the friggin story...
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Anonymous07/03/16
Come On!!!!
Finish the story!!!!!
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Anonymous07/27/16
Hmmm
You could have this as two lines.
She cheats.
Reader decide if it's BTB or RAAC.
Obviously she'll be there when he comes home. The question is, what then? If she tells the whole truth, I could possibly see the case for keeping her, though obviously there'd be no more Thursday nights, and I think a job change is in order, too. If she lies, even a little, she's gone.
She needed repercussions for cheating though and her group needed destroyed!
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Anonymous01/29/17
Rarely do I read stories by this author!
Before even considering a story by JPB I read the comments and the last line to see if he finished the story. If he hasn't I give him a 1* for insulting his readers and move on.
English
I agree.....Divorce
I agree with Sugna and some of the others.
The first time she kissed and was fingered she had a choice...guilt feelings, love for hubby and quit the gang or...
...or, she kept on doing it and more.
Divorce, she already cheated and as her friend pointed out...she really, REALLY wanted to play - ALL THE WAY!!!
Why would he let her make the decision?
That makes no sense. He knows what she's doing. He knows what she wants to do. And he knows he doesn't want that. With no kids why is he even questioning the decision to divorce her? Just get the attorney, file and move on. Nothing to see here folks.
the discovery
JPB is a manifestation of quantum uncertainty in the universe.
Like Schroedinger's cat, both alive and dead until someone opens the box.
Overrated?
As a writer JPB is good, he can tell the story with proficiency but that is the end of it.
His characters may be real but I do not like them, this husband is the prime example. The wife already made her decision, she cheated, and he is acting as she did not.
In any case, thank you for the writing, as stated before from a technical point of view is good.
Lies
The lies about what went on are crucial.
He should confront her and tell her he knows about Thursdays and give her two choices:
The TRUTH, and a commitment to give up the Thursdays OR, Divorce.
And if she tries the BS Ryan tried, he plays the tape about the BJ's, and walks out.
The Choice
Several commenters have said, correctly in my view, that she will choose him.
But as I said in my prior comment, it is NOT enough simply to choose not to complete her cheating - she HAS to confess the FULL extent of what she has done, including blow jobs that are so intense that she doesn't even noticed she's being fucked!
And yes, he SHOULD get copies of his recordings to the other husbands and wives.
He left the choice up to her?
Why? She's guilty of cheating, plain and simple. She's playing games with him and hiding her true feelings. She wants to cheat. No trusting her going forward. Time for a divorce, his choice , not hers. It would have been nice had you written that ending Bob. Or any ending for that matter. I thought I'd confirm your prologue so you didn't feel bad.
Well, nothing like insulting the reader even before the story starts.
This so called writer is so arrogant he feels the need to insult his readers by telling them if they are looking for a complete story they lack imagination. If I want to use my imagination to write my own ending to a story then I might as well write the rest of the story as well.
I was going to read this but after reading the prologue I decided to give the author one star for lacking the imagination to finish the damn story!
time to go nuclear
He already warned Ryan about not telling everything, so he needs to tell ALL spouses about Thursdays, then visit Ryan again and leave him tied and hurt. Then tell wifey to go with HER crowd because she does not belong in HIS life anymore !
But we all know Bob wont let that happen
Just Finish The Story
Come on.....finish the friggin story...
Come On!!!!
Finish the story!!!!!
Hmmm
You could have this as two lines.
She cheats.
Reader decide if it's BTB or RAAC.
Useless story, insulting author
Why are these people a couple?
Just the first of the unanswered questions - without a reason for him to save the marriage, he just thumps the assholes and leaves.
TOO MANY DECISIONS
and not enuff choices. TK U MLJ LV NV
Writer is a POS
He hasn't posted in a while, I'm hoping he died in a grease fire
KarenE is right again.
Obviously she'll be there when he comes home. The question is, what then? If she tells the whole truth, I could possibly see the case for keeping her, though obviously there'd be no more Thursday nights, and I think a job change is in order, too. If she lies, even a little, she's gone.
Liked it
She needed repercussions for cheating though and her group needed destroyed!
Rarely do I read stories by this author!
Before even considering a story by JPB I read the comments and the last line to see if he finished the story. If he hasn't I give him a 1* for insulting his readers and move on.
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