I like the story, but the writing, grammar and orientation reminds me of a Jr. Hight students attempts. Note to the writer: Spellcheck does not fix grammar. Perhaps have someone check for the proper use of a correctly spelled word or tense of that word.
Again, good story, but the writting takes away from it.
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Interesting story
I like the story, but the writing, grammar and orientation reminds me of a Jr. Hight students attempts. Note to the writer: Spellcheck does not fix grammar. Perhaps have someone check for the proper use of a correctly spelled word or tense of that word.
Again, good story, but the writting takes away from it.
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