All Comments on 'The Cycling Holiday'

although some bits sound like they might be based on past experiences (embellished perhaps), a bit long but a fun read nonetheless

Juste read 1st 14 pages and am loving it. Ignore the ingrates and keep up the writing

This is an extremely good story.

excellent story. maybe better to split it into separate chapters

I for one and happy that Victoriajohn is back to writing for Literotica. Lets hope he will continue with these great stories. I think the story was just as long as many others out there, it was just not broken up into chapters. No one said that you have to be able to read all in one setting. I thought the story was great & I love the reluctance and the tricks, but then the switch to loving it while she is getting gang banged.

goddddddddd... i'm so glad Your back to writing again..i have so missed You.. smiles.. i really loved this story and cant wait for more from You

patti

I agree with others that it is good to see you back to writing and certainly still on form. An excellent story thanks.

Really nice story and I loved it, you are one of my favourite writers and I do look forward to more stories from you, my most favourite story by any author ever being "Dream House" by you.

I love your writing style and the way things happen gradually.

The protagonist gets in deeper and deeper.Too good.

This is a classic!!

NEWSFLASH - many readers search for phrases in the stories they like. When a story has 18 pages -- finding that phrase is basically impossible. This speaks to an author too lazy to break his story into chapters. How considerate is that. Sometimes I search anyways but this story is so full of chat it is like the author was intentionally trying to make it long - or intentionally inconsiderate to the reader AGAIN. Reader be worn, if looking for a well written story, look elsewhere. Too many other better written stories on this website, some of which are even by this author.

Excellent story telling.

Great story, looking forward to reading a new one.

Just finding your work. Very good! Pace of roll out makes it fun to read. Love a wife getting side action and not being roughed up after being discovered cheating. Women are not innocents in an affair and truth be out there the babe makes her decision to play or we have a screaming rape story.

Thanks for sharing.

One of the best stories I have read on this site

Love this story !!

18 pages - all in one chapter - most totally excellent!!!