All Comments on 'Caught'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Stupid story

And very poorly written, too. A sixth grader would get an "F" for such sloppy writing.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Unreadable

Has this been translated from another language?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
English not your first language?

or are you just illiterate?

Unreadable drivel

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
story cut off

To add to the letdown the story ends mid-sentence!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep writing!

Find an editor and don't give up!! In time it may get better :-)

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