but enjoyed it nonetheless. I was expecting the secret lover to be the detective but co-workers is a close second...perhaps a story line for the future...anyway, good job.
This was a pretty good one. A surprise twist or two, concise but not too concise. Well written, and of course, something to satisfy the torch-the-bitch crowd (and I guess I'm at least a part-time member). Maybe I missed it, but I did not catch Frank's bio in terms of what he does for a living. The other problem I have relates to the story of Gail's "kidnapping" by the biker while Frank was shooting pool, or some such thing. That's pretty weak. Surely Frank would have wondered where she went, called the police because she was missing for five days, or whatever. And once Gail had escaped, the police would have phoned Frank to let him know she was safe, and what happened to her. I realize a story is just a story, and not the real world, but we do need a touch of credibility in order for us readers to identify with the characters. Thanks for writing.
Gail was both innocent and guilty. When Frank was doing what Gail had done behind his back when he believed the marriage over with Sherri Gail attacked Sherri. But then Frank was a one-woman man. I hope that this ending satisfies those readers who want everything spelled out.
Although I almost gave it 1* since it is impossible to sell women to whore house in Mexico and, except for science fiction, fairy tales, etc., if a story is impossible it deserves a rating of 1*.
It is impossible to sell American women to whore houses in Mexico. That would be all kinds of crimes in both Mexico and the USA. First ignore all all the other impossibilities. Sooner or later the American woman would talk to an American customer that would notify the police in the USA. The USA would lean on Mexico to extradite and the FBI would question her and the people or person that sold her would be arrested and sent to prison for life. No one would risk that for at most a few thousand dollars.
Since whore houses are not built to look like prisons with high fences and razor wire, the women would excape. To prevent that the whore houses would have to hire guards 24/7. They would also have to hire muscle because some of the customers would attempt to walk out with a woman and it would take muscle to prevent fights from occuring. Even then some fights would occur and that would involve the police.
Furthermore, the women would talk to customers and some of the customers would talk to the Mexican police and the whore house would be raided unless they paid very large sums of money for police and political protection. They would mean the women would cost a fortune for almost no benefit. The whore house would still have to provide housing and food as opposed to paying the women for their services. It is not difficult to hire women to be prositutes and the cost is far less that buying slaves, hiring guards and muscle, and paying protection money. Let alone the risk of committing crimes as opposed to being legal.
Liked it. The near-twin experience is a kick. Only part I didn't like was Marge not getting some come-uppance for avoiding Sherri's wedding and insistence on Gail at all family functions despite her sister and her husband's discomfort. And this after Gail's betrayal of her husband. In my opinion Marge was as much of a bitch as Gail and I'd be watching her closely if I was her husband.
Lets not forget that the cheating whore filed false police reports as the tapes show which also means that she took the drugs voluntarily which is a crime too.
I have to agree with other who saw this plot device as lame. If she was kidnapped, it would have been a hell of a coincidence and probably a life changing event. Would she really jump right back into bed with her boy toys? And why would the cops not have contacted hubby?
If it was a hoax to cover her tracks, how did she manage to pull it off without someone coming after her?
But the main idea of half sisters not knowing each other was good
She was probably selected for kidnapping in the first place because she was sending out slut vibes all over that bar. Then, once she had turned the tables on her abductors and returned to her loving and still gullible husband, she felt an even higher sense of empowerment to resume her slutting ways with her old gang of fuckbuddies.
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Anonymous11/06/14
Good one Bob
Just one question? Why didn't he take a little more time and protect more of his assets? He had the time. He should have left her with next to nothing. Your way, he really got no revenge. He needed it.
Kewl story bro.........err girl
But if she was kidnapped for a sex slave and escaped leading to the gang being arrested it would be such a major news story that he could not avoid knowing about it.
Just take a look at how long the case in Cleveland was in the national news.
Keeping it out of the news while the investigation is in progress? Yes.
Keeping it out of the news after arrests are made? Not a chance.
How do we know that "Detective" was legit? All he has is a business card that Gail gave him. Anyone can print a business card on a home computer. When he called, it didn't go to a Police switchboard, it went straight to "Detective Davie", who was probably one of her lovers.
As someone else said, how was this kidnapping/sex/drug ring case not all over the news?
A lot of these stories (and not just JPB's) have wives who want to stay with their husbands because they "love" them, but NEED the hot sex that they get from their lover(s).
I'm sorry, if you truly "love" your husband, but there is something major lacking in your sex life you have several LEGITIMATE choices:
1) WORK with your husband to improve your sex life.
2) Accept your sex life for what it is, and go on with your life with the husband you supposedly "love".
3) TALK to your husband about your feelings and needs and try to convince him to allow you to have extra-marital sex (and be willing to accept that IF he goes along that he may want the same opportunities!).
4) Get a divorce, a choice that may be made for you depending upon your husband's reaction to 3) if you try it!
What you do NOT do is cheat!
And, I hope it doesn't need to be said, this all applies in reverse if it is the husband that is dissatisfied with HIS sex life!
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Anonymous05/24/15
Decent story, well told.
I know that it's a small thing, but Gail is their half sister, not their step sister.
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Anonymous09/15/15
Well let's see. How many times did he lose a wife?
Wife #1 left with the bikers. He found a replacement. Wife #1 came back and he lost the replacement. He threw wife #1 out. And he got the replacement back. Whew! The only thing that didn't ring true was that he didn't do what wife #2 suggested. He should have divested himself of everything possible so that when he got divorced he had to give wife #1 practically nothing. Not too smart. Of course it probably wasn't smart to take up with a look a like wife #2 that was going to put him into a position where he has to see wife #1 at all the family functions. That was just dumb.
Love this lil yarn ! It is everything about JPB that I like, and none of the JPB cuck stories that I do not ! Love him or hate him , he has a style that simply flows so naturally that it pulls you into the story.
5*'s
The wife getting kidnapped twist was just to big a plot hole and ruined the second plot twist of the wife really being a cheater. If the kidnapping was real.....
The rescue would of been in the news
The cops/FBI would of alerted hubby his wife was now safe
The cops/FBI would of checked hubby out to see if he had anything to do with her getting kidnapped
Hubby taking as gospel the word of a person his wife, who he felt had cheated on him, asked him to ring was in fact really a cop and the story was true was just bullshit.
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Anonymous06/16/16
American authors and the English language
One of the nicer stories from good ol' Bob, but why is it that american authors in general cannot tell the difference between stepsiblings, halfsiblings and full siblings?? It is not only JPB who fucks up on this one. It is typical for american authors.
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Anonymous10/28/16
@anonymous 6.16.16
We know the difference over here. The reason you see it more on American authors is likely because there are just a lot more American authors.
English
Thank God!
Thank God you escaped and tossed out that guy using your name. Welcome back.
Ditto:
I agree with koreavet. Good read, I really enjoyed it.
Wow
Good story but I think I have whiplash.
Koreavet:
Thank you for your service to our country.
Twists and turns, oh my!
Just another in a long line of good, plotted stories that deliver the goods. You delivered a good double whammy with this one. Another winner.
BOB!!!!!!!!!
Good!!!!!!!!
Knew it was coming...
but enjoyed it nonetheless. I was expecting the secret lover to be the detective but co-workers is a close second...perhaps a story line for the future...anyway, good job.
We can agree that JPB knows his readers . . .
This was a pretty good one. A surprise twist or two, concise but not too concise. Well written, and of course, something to satisfy the torch-the-bitch crowd (and I guess I'm at least a part-time member). Maybe I missed it, but I did not catch Frank's bio in terms of what he does for a living. The other problem I have relates to the story of Gail's "kidnapping" by the biker while Frank was shooting pool, or some such thing. That's pretty weak. Surely Frank would have wondered where she went, called the police because she was missing for five days, or whatever. And once Gail had escaped, the police would have phoned Frank to let him know she was safe, and what happened to her. I realize a story is just a story, and not the real world, but we do need a touch of credibility in order for us readers to identify with the characters. Thanks for writing.
Imagination
JPB does have a vivid imagination and this was a good ending where no one went nuclear.
A note of clarification
Sherri and Gail are half-sisters, not step sisters.
Excellent Twister!
Great work, JPB. You are more than a bit paranoid about women!
Great little story!
One of your best for me. Didn't have all the sick people that you often write about. I like to enjoy the main characters.
Hey JPB, I liked this of Shrrri & Gail . . .
and you have so many that I can't possibly read them all and reply. But this one was fun to read! Most enjoyable. Any chance for a sequel? Thank you.
LOVED IT !
Gail was both innocent and guilty. When Frank was doing what Gail had done behind his back when he believed the marriage over with Sherri Gail attacked Sherri. But then Frank was a one-woman man. I hope that this ending satisfies those readers who want everything spelled out.
I gave it 5*****s
Although I almost gave it 1* since it is impossible to sell women to whore house in Mexico and, except for science fiction, fairy tales, etc., if a story is impossible it deserves a rating of 1*.
It is impossible to sell American women to whore houses in Mexico. That would be all kinds of crimes in both Mexico and the USA. First ignore all all the other impossibilities. Sooner or later the American woman would talk to an American customer that would notify the police in the USA. The USA would lean on Mexico to extradite and the FBI would question her and the people or person that sold her would be arrested and sent to prison for life. No one would risk that for at most a few thousand dollars.
Since whore houses are not built to look like prisons with high fences and razor wire, the women would excape. To prevent that the whore houses would have to hire guards 24/7. They would also have to hire muscle because some of the customers would attempt to walk out with a woman and it would take muscle to prevent fights from occuring. Even then some fights would occur and that would involve the police.
Furthermore, the women would talk to customers and some of the customers would talk to the Mexican police and the whore house would be raided unless they paid very large sums of money for police and political protection. They would mean the women would cost a fortune for almost no benefit. The whore house would still have to provide housing and food as opposed to paying the women for their services. It is not difficult to hire women to be prositutes and the cost is far less that buying slaves, hiring guards and muscle, and paying protection money. Let alone the risk of committing crimes as opposed to being legal.
Good story
Liked it. The near-twin experience is a kick. Only part I didn't like was Marge not getting some come-uppance for avoiding Sherri's wedding and insistence on Gail at all family functions despite her sister and her husband's discomfort. And this after Gail's betrayal of her husband. In my opinion Marge was as much of a bitch as Gail and I'd be watching her closely if I was her husband.
I never know what I'll get
With a JPB story. He bounces back and forth between wimps and men like a tennis ball at Roland Garros. I liked this one.
Lets not forget that the cheating whore filed false police reports as the tapes show which also means that she took the drugs voluntarily which is a crime too.
kidnapping was silly
I have to agree with other who saw this plot device as lame. If she was kidnapped, it would have been a hell of a coincidence and probably a life changing event. Would she really jump right back into bed with her boy toys? And why would the cops not have contacted hubby?
If it was a hoax to cover her tracks, how did she manage to pull it off without someone coming after her?
But the main idea of half sisters not knowing each other was good
Kind of makes sense
She was probably selected for kidnapping in the first place because she was sending out slut vibes all over that bar. Then, once she had turned the tables on her abductors and returned to her loving and still gullible husband, she felt an even higher sense of empowerment to resume her slutting ways with her old gang of fuckbuddies.
Good one Bob
Just one question? Why didn't he take a little more time and protect more of his assets? He had the time. He should have left her with next to nothing. Your way, he really got no revenge. He needed it.
kewl story bro
Kewl story bro.........err girl
But if she was kidnapped for a sex slave and escaped leading to the gang being arrested it would be such a major news story that he could not avoid knowing about it.
Just take a look at how long the case in Cleveland was in the national news.
Keeping it out of the news while the investigation is in progress? Yes.
Keeping it out of the news after arrests are made? Not a chance.
Kidnaping
I'm not sure about the kidnapping.
How do we know that "Detective" was legit? All he has is a business card that Gail gave him. Anyone can print a business card on a home computer. When he called, it didn't go to a Police switchboard, it went straight to "Detective Davie", who was probably one of her lovers.
As someone else said, how was this kidnapping/sex/drug ring case not all over the news?
Love vs Sex
A lot of these stories (and not just JPB's) have wives who want to stay with their husbands because they "love" them, but NEED the hot sex that they get from their lover(s).
I'm sorry, if you truly "love" your husband, but there is something major lacking in your sex life you have several LEGITIMATE choices:
1) WORK with your husband to improve your sex life.
2) Accept your sex life for what it is, and go on with your life with the husband you supposedly "love".
3) TALK to your husband about your feelings and needs and try to convince him to allow you to have extra-marital sex (and be willing to accept that IF he goes along that he may want the same opportunities!).
4) Get a divorce, a choice that may be made for you depending upon your husband's reaction to 3) if you try it!
What you do NOT do is cheat!
And, I hope it doesn't need to be said, this all applies in reverse if it is the husband that is dissatisfied with HIS sex life!
Decent story, well told.
I know that it's a small thing, but Gail is their half sister, not their step sister.
Well let's see. How many times did he lose a wife?
Wife #1 left with the bikers. He found a replacement. Wife #1 came back and he lost the replacement. He threw wife #1 out. And he got the replacement back. Whew! The only thing that didn't ring true was that he didn't do what wife #2 suggested. He should have divested himself of everything possible so that when he got divorced he had to give wife #1 practically nothing. Not too smart. Of course it probably wasn't smart to take up with a look a like wife #2 that was going to put him into a position where he has to see wife #1 at all the family functions. That was just dumb.
JPB at his finest
Love this lil yarn ! It is everything about JPB that I like, and none of the JPB cuck stories that I do not ! Love him or hate him , he has a style that simply flows so naturally that it pulls you into the story.
5*'s
The wife getting kidnapped twist was just to big a plot hole and ruined the second plot twist of the wife really being a cheater. If the kidnapping was real.....
The rescue would of been in the news
The cops/FBI would of alerted hubby his wife was now safe
The cops/FBI would of checked hubby out to see if he had anything to do with her getting kidnapped
Hubby taking as gospel the word of a person his wife, who he felt had cheated on him, asked him to ring was in fact really a cop and the story was true was just bullshit.
American authors and the English language
One of the nicer stories from good ol' Bob, but why is it that american authors in general cannot tell the difference between stepsiblings, halfsiblings and full siblings?? It is not only JPB who fucks up on this one. It is typical for american authors.
@anonymous 6.16.16
We know the difference over here. The reason you see it more on American authors is likely because there are just a lot more American authors.
GEE I JUST CANT IMAGINE
the hubby refusing to be a Sucker Cuck again. TK U MLJ LV NV
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