All Comments on 'Shark Week'

"warm waters of the southern Atlantic"

Not off Southern Africa. The Atlantic is cold, colder than the Ocean off San Francisco. The Indian Ocean warm.

I chose your story to be reviewed on my thread, Gable's Daily Reviews, and you can read what I said about it here: http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=35005189&postcount=8

I enjoyed your story because Shark Week is my favorite time of the year and I like how you combined it with erotic literature. That being said I think this story could really be beefed up a lot. I enjoyed your protagonist enough to want to know more about him and even though I dislike mermaids, I think you could have done a lot more with the undersea world too. Other than a few technical and grammatical mistakes I think your piece accurately demonstrates good flow, which is something that a lot of writers fail to achieve so congratulations!

I gave you 4/5 stars on the Literotica Rating System because it was good, but the sex could have been a little better and I know that you could have put a lot more meat into this story. I enjoyed it a lot and look forward to reading more of your stories.

Enjoy the Ride,

Cassandra Gables (AKA JeffLeigh)

I have a bumper sticker on my car that reads "I am a shark trapped in a humans body" and I will never look at it the same way again.

Can you write a male-shark hybrid version with kidnap to another world?

Loved it!! Thanks,

[18.12.22]

Sexcellente!

11/10!!!!!