by MemberX
There has to be a sequal. A second night is needed. Mommy needs to realize that Davey was born 9 months after that night and the reason that they have not had anymore rugrats is not luck but that Bob is firing blanks and Jimmy is Davey's daddy.
Could anyone really sleep through all that? (If she does it again, I reckon she owes it to Jimmy to wake him up.)
I'm not sure what the point was of putting in the the reader's head that there are consequences of unprotected sex. What a mood killer. I realize there is the hint that their child might be Jimmy's but that does not contribute to the story.
Let Jimmy catch her fucking him again, and figure out the -year-old is his.