All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping'

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HendrixieaHendrixieaover 13 years ago
Sequal please!!!

There has to be a sequal. A second night is needed. Mommy needs to realize that Davey was born 9 months after that night and the reason that they have not had anymore rugrats is not luck but that Bob is firing blanks and Jimmy is Davey's daddy.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Implausible, but charged

Could anyone really sleep through all that? (If she does it again, I reckon she owes it to Jimmy to wake him up.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
agree with hendrixe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Confusing

The beginning was confusing but otherwise good story

ErotonautErotonautabout 12 years ago
Another secret?

Just how old _is_ li'l Davey?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Slut

and he mairred her??? bs story...bill

Xplorer2000Xplorer2000over 10 years ago
Pretty good story but . . .

I'm not sure what the point was of putting in the the reader's head that there are consequences of unprotected sex. What a mood killer. I realize there is the hint that their child might be Jimmy's but that does not contribute to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sequel!

Let Jimmy catch her fucking him again, and figure out the -year-old is his.

FseriesFseriesalmost 2 years ago

Should have never married her. Looks like a divorce is in the future.

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