Great story with great imagery and erotic undertones throughout. I think the story had a great pace and kept it hot and sultry right on through. This Author is quite talented at getting your heart beating a little faster with each word. Hopefully she keeps up the great work producing worlds for the rest of us to live vicariously through.
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Wonderful writing and very erotic
Great story with great imagery and erotic undertones throughout. I think the story had a great pace and kept it hot and sultry right on through. This Author is quite talented at getting your heart beating a little faster with each word. Hopefully she keeps up the great work producing worlds for the rest of us to live vicariously through.
Ps. "Run Home Jack" :)
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