It will be great to see how you're modifying it after a few years.
Will be looking forward enthusiastically for your chapters yet to come.
GE
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Anonymous08/18/10
No need
Thought the first (and complete?) version was very good. Don't see a need to modify anything or split it in shorter parts. The only thing I would appreciate, I think, is another chapter in addition to your first version.
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Really enjoyed the earlier version.
It will be great to see how you're modifying it after a few years.
Will be looking forward enthusiastically for your chapters yet to come.
GE
No need
Thought the first (and complete?) version was very good. Don't see a need to modify anything or split it in shorter parts. The only thing I would appreciate, I think, is another chapter in addition to your first version.
At the same high quality level as ever
Lots of personality development here and good dialog. It is nice to have a published author contributing to our site.
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