All Comments on 'His Fantasy or Mine Pt. 01'

by DaBull13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very good,

but you left us hanging up there...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Such a tease.

Readers, check the title. Totally enjoyed this opening story and hope to see Pt 2 soon.

Only critique is to proofread better and don’t rely on spell checker; it’s moaning not morning (morning and gasping). This was a good opening story and like the other readers I want to see the rest of the story.

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Story writer and teller. It’s all just fantasy. Well maybe it’s all fantasy.